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Soldier's Return

Ahh Jamie lad where hast tha bin?
not heathered shire, so searched within,
nor  mountain river's gilded beck, but
inside burnt out blackened wreck

Brings the coffin from the plane, 
touches tarmac black again; coming
home with no hello, attends the 
soldier’s funeral show

Cuts my heart in two to see, bonny 
lads bright bonnet free, sits on top 
of  panelled wood, resting still as
new formed bud

Now your’e here lad home with me,
resting down by blossomed tree,
I hear the nightjar’s plaintiff  plea,
and tip my hat to soldiers free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/10/2016 1:37:00 AM
Brilliant - Absolute brilliance!! A powerful piece of rhyme with beautiful lines throughout...So very elegant. A moving piece written in the style of the great A E Housman. Most impressed! My very best to you, Peter. :-) john
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Date: 8/6/2015 9:06:00 AM
LOL!!!??? Afolabi....I don't understand why you wrote Lol!! for such a sad poem?...do you know that Lol! ="laugh out loud"?...Peter
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Date: 8/6/2015 5:17:00 AM
Lol!!!!! I love how this piece was constructed, it flows smoothly. Excellence........A.M.
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