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Soldier

Life lost meaning. She had hated that war since it first begun,
Now the worst thing of all, disbelieving that it had taken her son.

She wore his dog tags and his medal for the valour they implied.
Her heart was aching, sorrow engulfed her, she felt torment inside.

The misery that her loss had created, proved to be all too strong.
She was unable to sleep, she just cried all day and all night long.

Finally, weeks later some sleep befell her and she began to dream.
There in the distance was her boy, alive and well, or so it would seem.

He was with other young soldiers all marching up a very steep hill.
 All had packs upon their backs, but her son was standing quite still.

He was struggling hard to climb as his pack was the biggest of all.
She asked him, "Why is your pack so large and the other’s so small?"

"Most of the guy's loved ones, have happy memories of their life,
But all I have left you Mother, is tumultuous sorrow, grief and strife.

Our packs are full of the tears that our loved ones all have shed,
All the tears you have cried Mother, make my pack heavy as lead."

When she awoke, she thought of good times with her son, galore.
The happiness he brought to her life, and she didn’t cry any more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write/story/picture. Have a great/blessed day.............
Volumes Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 9:14 PM
Thank you Paula
Bowring Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 11:13 AM
What a beautiful, thought provoking poem.So poignant especially with the mothers dream. Love the last stanza. Thank you for sharing.Warmest wishes.
Volumes Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Thank you so much
Seal Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 3:26 PM
Nice story, enjoyed the read. Take care, Richard
Volumes Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Thank you so much
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