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Solar Kisses

Radiant love of mine Drenched in your solar brine Beaming with superior eyes Your lamp of luxury Rushing chariots of warmth Upon my face and soul Shinning above God’s gift Timed with an eternal wish A Celebrated canopy Of your golden bliss

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/11/2009 7:57:00 PM

Beautiful, Laura. The images are so vivid and lovely. Thank you for sharing! Love, Robin

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 2/2/2009 6:35:00 AM

A well written piece i really enjoyed reading this

John Heck

Date: 1/25/2009 1:04:00 PM

Loved the title and the last two lines are genius..."a celebrated canopy of golden bliss"...such an excellent visual - and a soothing emotion conveyed. Peace and hugs, John

Donna Golden

Date: 1/24/2009 4:11:00 PM

This is just gorgeous, Laura. I can feel it...and it is needed warmth on this frigid January day! Thanks for your sweet comments. Donna G.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/23/2009 5:57:00 PM

Wonderful poem, I loved the tone of this piece..it just flowed so beautifully...Nicely done..God Bless*Tyesha

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/23/2009 4:47:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Laura! So warm and a feel good poem!! Hope you plan to enter this in Chrstie's contest!! A winning poem! ~ Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/23/2009 4:22:00 PM

Wow!! I am so in love with this piece. This is pure beauty and a delight to see. Loved it!