Laura Mckenzie Poet Free verse

Solar Kisses

Radiant love of mine
Drenched in your solar brine 
Beaming with superior eyes 
Your lamp of luxury  
Rushing chariots of warmth 
Upon my face and soul 
Shinning above God’s gift
Timed with an eternal wish
A Celebrated canopy 
Of your golden bliss

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Robin L. Gass February 11, 2009 at 7:57 PM Beautiful, Laura. The images are so vivid and lovely. Thank you for sharing! Love, Robin

Malcolm Dyer February 2, 2009 at 6:35 AM A well written piece i really enjoyed reading this

John Heck January 25, 2009 at 1:04 PM Loved the title and the last two lines are genius..."a celebrated canopy of golden bliss"...such an excellent visual - and a soothing emotion conveyed. Peace and hugs, John

Donna Golden January 24, 2009 at 4:11 PM This is just gorgeous, Laura. I can feel it...and it is needed warmth on this frigid January day! Thanks for your sweet comments. Donna G.

Tyesha Ehigiator January 23, 2009 at 5:57 PM Wonderful poem, I loved the tone of this piece..it just flowed so beautifully...Nicely done..God Bless*Tyesha

Carrie Richards January 23, 2009 at 4:47 PM Beautiful poem, Laura! So warm and a feel good poem!! Hope you plan to enter this in Chrstie's contest!! A winning poem! ~ Carrie

Christopher Higgins January 23, 2009 at 4:22 PM Wow!! I am so in love with this piece. This is pure beauty and a delight to see. Loved it!