Solar-Lunar Wonder

Under the broad sweep of endless sky,
In that rare and hallowed moment
When the moon, in audacious stealth,
Edges before the sun,
A quietude descends, profound and deep.

The air, thick with anticipation,
Holds its breath;
The earth, in its tireless orbit,
Pauses—in reverence 
To the grandeur to which we all belong.

This spectacle, this dance of light and shadow,
Where the day is night and the sun is dark,
Unveils the universe’s unfathomable mystery,
A reminder of our fleeting passage
In the boundless march of time.

As the corona flares,
A crown of light, ethereal and untouchable,
Encircles the shadowed moon—
A garnered glimpse into the sun’s hidden majesty.
In this moment, we are but specks,
Yet infinitely connected to the cosmic ballet.

This eclipse, eagerly awaited, a miracle witnessed,
Serves not just as a meeting of celestial bodies,
But as a bridge across the void,
Linking heart to heart, soul to soul,
To the very essence of existence itself.

In awe, we stand,
Observers of the universe’s embrace,
Witnesses to the endless dance
Of light and shadow,
Of time and space,
And the quiet, enduring marvel
That is life, in its myriad forms and fleeting beauty.

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Date: 4/25/2024 6:09:00 PM
Don, nice poetic chronicling of the eclipse.
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Date: 4/9/2024 6:50:00 AM
- A great poem about a historic day in the sky, Don ... a miracle witnessed, I'm sure of that :) -
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/9/2024 9:04:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lisa! It was a very cool experience. Poetic one might say! Cheers, Don
Date: 4/9/2024 1:40:00 AM
What a celestial write dear don, how youv written and described the dance of light and dark and shadows, and how it sometimes remind us more than ever that there is a higher power or creator. I especially thought these lines were beyond powerful! “ Where the day is night and the sun is dark, Unveils the universe’s unfathomable mystery, A reminder of our fleeting passage In the boundless march of time.” so true. So many mysteries… so much in nature, an eye opener, of fleeting time. Fave!
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/9/2024 3:30:00 AM
Ink Empress, thank you for the kind and thoughtful comments. Cheers, Don PS: It was an awesome experience.
Date: 4/9/2024 12:08:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/9/2024 4:04:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanette.
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/9/2024 3:31:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanette.
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