SOLACE WINTERS SPRING DAWNS-

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Homesick For A Place That Has Never Been My Home | Winter ...

in the latter moments seasons move slowly quick lowering abundance consequence grounds covered in dews mist end of Winter, breath of artic springs next on seasons list kiss of solace of springtime rings welcoming robins-sparrows solemn sings 1/18/24 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2024©

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/18/2024 4:04:00 PM

Hello James, this poem makes me wish it was Spring. blessings. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2024 4:23:00 AM

Hello James, Yes we are still in the winter month. It is cold here. Some of the neighboljurs have not taken down .Christmas decorations. Because it being too cold. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 1/18/2024 10:15:00 PM

Ahh! Darlene sadly though we're only into second month of winter... LoL ahh...excuse me time to hang out with my favorite comforter and furnace...blessings unto you as well, still James

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/18/2024 10:22:00 AM

James, your poem paints a poignant transition, winter's breath yielding to spring's kiss. Seasons turn in a slow-quick dance, dewdrops pregnant with promise. The robin's song, a solemn hymn to nature's renewal, echoes in the mist-laced air. A beautiful ode to the bittersweet beauty of endings and beginnings. - Blessings, Daniel

James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 1/18/2024 10:39:00 AM

Thanks be unto you, new year blessings to you and your families. Alas we await springs welcomed gates. Blessings and peace to you kind, sir, Daniel