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Softly Overpower

(((*))) | | | | | | burst forth my flower on thine long slender tower such grace and power glistening from the shower naked beauty shan’t cower Bite Size Poem no.47 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Tanka 5/7/5/7/7 how many syllables 06/15/22

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 3:01:00 PM

Charming brevity, David ~

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/10/2022 3:11:00 PM

Thanks so much Line, I remember enjoying writing this one for your contest, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 6/26/2022 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest! "Such grace and power"... :)Paulette

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/26/2022 10:40:00 AM

Heya Paulette, they certainly are some pieces of work, thank you so much for stopping by, cheers David

Karen Jones

Date: 6/24/2022 1:16:00 PM

Well done congrats

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/24/2022 1:37:00 PM

Thank you Caren, I’m always delighted to get a rating, cheers David

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/24/2022 3:15:00 AM

I love this sensual poem David. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/24/2022 5:19:00 AM

Heya Connie, thank you so much for stopping by, one of my more positive poems lol, cheers David

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2022 8:41:00 PM

Softly overpowered, indeed. Beautiful. Congratulations!

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/24/2022 12:19:00 AM

Heya Chris, the power of the flower is indeed a beautiful thing, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/23/2022 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Have a great/blessed day.......................

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/23/2022 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Paula, I’m delighted you enjoyed, cheers David

Lunita Blanca

Date: 6/15/2022 5:03:00 PM

Well done Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/15/2022 8:49:00 PM

Your too kind, hey I’m not Tom, but I’ll take the compliment, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/15/2022 2:49:00 PM

Quite a creative verse David, he's one lucky bumblebee. Hope you're enjoying the rest. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/16/2022 11:12:00 AM

I'm not the only poet on here lol

Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/15/2022 3:22:00 PM

But it was worth it lol.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/15/2022 3:05:00 PM

No rest for the wicked Tom, I think someone said that in jest, my bumblebee will be in for a beating by his queen for overindulgence lol, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 6/15/2022 1:32:00 PM

There's an image of a graceful flower emerging with her skin glistening with scented oil. Too tempting not to touch her velvety petals.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/15/2022 2:04:00 PM

Shame if he does not

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/15/2022 1:37:00 PM

Oh my such redolence, and along comes Mr bumblebee to feast on her nectar, lol, cheers David