Premiere Contest WinnerSoftly My Love

I crawl into the turmoil of life...where
black ravens plague this existence
bound by love and affection
I embrace you...you hold me tight
sounds of swift ivory doves cry out
never cured or full of deep blight

weeping in the forsaken land of my desolated heart's remains
where I was alone, seeking you
as the tempest rages in warm rains
I sense your essence in the breeze

the wind blows and gusts prevail
   and
a million fairytales tremble at us

In the deepest realm of the darkest shade, I cried
yet you stay with me, longing for my hopelessness to cease
intense obscurity of the calamity I faced before you attains

I knew the pain of loss and despair you carried with ease
I found myself tethered to your understanding
fleeting into the ebon night, for our love loses not insight

sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection
your genuine adoration sustains
saturated in loneliness were you
my alleviation found in perfection

emerging from the dust I was found
descending onto my grateful knees
for I am a woman (*or man*) craving to be near you for all eternity
they know how our love does outshine with flickering light
and I shall feel this pure affection or you, my beloved...eternally


9/8/19
contest Lu's poem switcha-roo
four lines added
I crawl into the turmoil of life...where
where I was alone seeking you
in the deepest realm of the darkest shade I cried
I found myself tethered to your understanding
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 2:06 PM
Hello Frederic Parker, so romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 4:52 AM
This is a wonderful poem and I love what you did with it. Congratulations on your top placement. Love and prayers, Gina
La France Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Frederic congratulations on your deserving top win in the contest with this amazing poem and the music is so beautiful!
Mcgee Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Frederic...you found the voice and flow of her sentences in a richly evoked poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win.
There Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 10:46 AM
My goodness ~ Congratulations, Frederic, on your first place win!! Well-deserved <3
Scars Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 6:02 AM
wow dear Frederic, never cease to amaze me! I know that there are many repeating lines in this contest poem but you added was outstanding. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for your participation. :)-luloo
There Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 11:05 PM
Oh, Frederic, I love what you did with this. You took it, and, although it is a difficult challenge (I gave up myself ;), you made it your own ~ using only four original lines at that!! It is deep and intimate and the connection feels real ~ nicely done.
One Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 3:10 PM
I dont know what this contest is about, but this is a wonderful poem..
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 11:57 AM
This is an amazing , beautifully written poem Frederic. A favorite :)
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