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Softly My Love Premiere Contest Winner

I crawl into the turmoil of life...where black ravens plague this existence bound by love and affection I embrace you...you hold me tight sounds of swift ivory doves cry out never cured or full of deep blight weeping in the forsaken land of my desolated heart's remains where I was alone, seeking you as the tempest rages in warm rains I sense your essence in the breeze the wind blows and gusts prevail and a million fairytales tremble at us In the deepest realm of the darkest shade, I cried yet you stay with me, longing for my hopelessness to cease intense obscurity of the calamity I faced before you attains I knew the pain of loss and despair you carried with ease I found myself tethered to your understanding fleeting into the ebon night, for our love loses not insight sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection your genuine adoration sustains saturated in loneliness were you my alleviation found in perfection emerging from the dust I was found descending onto my grateful knees for I am a woman (*or man*) craving to be near you for all eternity they know how our love does outshine with flickering light and I shall feel this pure affection or you, my beloved...eternally 9/8/19 contest Lu's poem switcha-roo four lines added I crawl into the turmoil of life...where where I was alone seeking you in the deepest realm of the darkest shade I cried I found myself tethered to your understanding

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Date: 5/22/2020 2:06:00 PM
Hello Frederic Parker, so romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 10/10/2019 4:52:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem and I love what you did with it. Congratulations on your top placement. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/8/2019 7:45:00 PM
Frederic congratulations on your deserving top win in the contest with this amazing poem and the music is so beautiful!
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Date: 10/7/2019 4:47:00 PM
Frederic...you found the voice and flow of her sentences in a richly evoked poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win.
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Date: 10/7/2019 10:46:00 AM
My goodness ~ Congratulations, Frederic, on your first place win!! Well-deserved <3
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Date: 10/7/2019 6:02:00 AM
wow dear Frederic, never cease to amaze me! I know that there are many repeating lines in this contest poem but you added was outstanding. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for your participation. :)-luloo
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Date: 9/9/2019 11:05:00 PM
Oh, Frederic, I love what you did with this. You took it, and, although it is a difficult challenge (I gave up myself ;), you made it your own ~ using only four original lines at that!! It is deep and intimate and the connection feels real ~ nicely done.
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Date: 9/8/2019 3:10:00 PM
I dont know what this contest is about, but this is a wonderful poem..
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Date: 9/8/2019 11:57:00 AM
This is an amazing , beautifully written poem Frederic. A favorite :)
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