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Soft Zephyr

Susurrus...
             Of the soothing breeze is food
                   For my heart and soul! 
         Tintinnabulations of joy resounding! 

   "Zing!" the string of my pleased heart goes 
   Every time colorful confetti of Autumn leaves
    Pirouette down from trees and fall atop my
  Head. I walk through woods of gold, happily. 
 Year's almost done, yet I wish Autumn lingers;
     Refreshing zephyr winnowing dry foliage.



''Z'' Contest, New Or Old - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Theme chosen: Zephyr
Date of submission: 12/04/2021
Date originally written: 09/26/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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La France Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 2:28 PM
Edward, congratulations on your First Place win in my "Z" Contest. An excellent poem, I love those dancing leaves too and your image is wonderful ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
Ibeh Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback, congrats and my placement , Constance:-) Most obliged.
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Great imagery and soothing feeling, Edward, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Hugs and lots of Love Eve
Ibeh Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 3:52 PM
Thank you very much, Eve:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations on your win with your "Soft Zephyr" write. Thanks for adding your pretty fall trees. I can feel the breeze and the leaves. Have a blessed day with your win..............
Ibeh Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 3:53 PM
Thank you so much, Paula:-)
Kauffman Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 1:16 PM
This is definitely a "zinger" Edward. It is so full of delightful color vivid as fall leaves. So well done my friend! High fives and hats off for your win! Blessings!
Ibeh Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Thank you very much, Sam:-)
Hankins Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Well-done, my friend. I think Caren will really like this!
Ibeh Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Milt:-) I hope so!*fingerscrossed*
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