Soft Zephyr

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Susurrus... Of the soothing breeze is food For my heart and soul! Tintinnabulations of joy resounding! "Zing!" the string of my pleased heart goes Every time colorful confetti of Autumn leaves Pirouette down from trees and fall atop my Head. I walk through woods of gold, happily. Year's almost done, yet I wish Autumn lingers; Refreshing zephyr winnowing dry foliage. ''Z'' Contest, New Or Old - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Theme chosen: Zephyr Date of submission: 12/04/2021 Date originally written: 09/26/2021

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Constance La France

Date: 12/11/2021 2:28:00 PM

Edward, congratulations on your First Place win in my "Z" Contest. An excellent poem, I love those dancing leaves too and your image is wonderful ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/12/2021 9:23:00 AM

Thank you very much for the feedback, congrats and my placement , Constance:-) Most obliged.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2021 4:47:00 PM

Great imagery and soothing feeling, Edward, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Hugs and lots of Love Eve

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/9/2021 3:52:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/8/2021 8:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with your "Soft Zephyr" write. Thanks for adding your pretty fall trees. I can feel the breeze and the leaves. Have a blessed day with your win..............

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/9/2021 3:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula:-)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/7/2021 1:16:00 PM

This is definitely a "zinger" Edward. It is so full of delightful color vivid as fall leaves. So well done my friend! High fives and hats off for your win! Blessings!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/7/2021 1:22:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sam:-)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/26/2021 10:48:00 AM

Well-done, my friend. I think Caren will really like this!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/26/2021 11:03:00 AM

Thank you very much indeed, Milt:-) I hope so!*fingerscrossed*