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27771055 - bedroom with moonlight and smoke - Advanced Sleep Technologies,  Inc. |

soft, sweet slumber -

oh, You ...

you found me again
unveiled amid the bosom of my dreams -
my consciousness peeled back
and flayed
tabled in a twilight mist
for the memories of you to feast upon
drowning in the fathoms of your gaze
your scent ?
pouring its alert fascination
into my marrow
the tang of your pulpy tongue
the sweet confection of your skin, resplendent
(and the warm, wild places beneath it) -
vessels and walls and fair, tepid flesh
your intent within it all -
to conduct me
while allowing me the sway?
to exploit my exploitation of the moments -
letting me control your control of me
coy, seductive smile on your face
perfecting your line and movements
as a ballerina should …
it is all still there
as if the years since were phantoms
gone with a breath of irresolute regret …
and you inhabit me now as then
as EVER
preying on my sleep-time meanderings
without mercy, without bridle?
without an ounce of benevolence or pity …
oh, You -
no other vexes me
so completely
so purely
no one pervades my
nettled dreams as you do
nor will anyone -
ever …
morning always comes too soon, blushing
and much, much too bright
for the love that we both swore eternity to -
that we knew with all conviction
to be as sure as starlight
as dire as death itself
and as deep as the sea of suns
is now nothing but a
damp blemish ...

on my pillow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:40 PM
there is that amazing Bardenesque style. Amazing, and congrats on the big win (I failed miserably this time)
Dutta Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 6:09 AM
BRILLIANT Big Congrats to win TOP
Chiri Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 4:46 PM
Gregory this was amazing! Congrats on your win!;)
Carber Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Strong imagery, Greg-- congrats on your win, my friend!
Hamilton Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Yeah Greg, beautiful phrasing that is uniquely you, engulfed in a twilight mist, drowning in the fathoms of your gaze, impeccable writing...your ballerina still haunting your dreams...I see!
Barden Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Thank you so much, my good friend, I'm really pleased you enjoyed it! Yeah, she will always be a deep-seated love, without closure, (as are one-or-two others, but she by far the deepest) ... a consistent muse, I guess, and perhaps that's what lost love is meant for us "sensitive, creative" types. I sometimes wish I DIDN'T feel so deeply ... I imagine you can relate. Blessings, John.
Man Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Hi Gregory, this is Beautiful!
Barden Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 8:50 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! :-)
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