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soft scarlet flutters in winter's pristine chilled air— a cardinal calls 3-15-19 Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku- Poetry Contest Sponsor Dear Heart

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Edlynn Nau

Date: 6/26/2019 10:28:00 AM

This is probably my favorite bird besides the Morning lark. You captured the flash they make in the dead of winter. Liked this and it is amazing how the abstract of a few words can still say so much!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/26/2019 11:47:00 AM

Thank you very much Edlynn. I enjoy haiku but haven't posted that many. : ) xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2019 5:31:00 PM

connie, I am just going off now. Gotta hit the gym soon too. Wish I knew a new poem of yours to visit. let me know if you post one up!!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/23/2019 12:09:00 AM

I will. Dr. bruised my eye yesterday so it is still sore today. It should be better tomorrow. That is why I haven't been online much today. Thanks Connie

Edlynn Nau

Date: 4/13/2019 1:07:00 PM

LOVE IT! My favorite bird even though we don’t have them in California. Love them in red or yellow. Just a beautiful bird and you summed it up here most gracefully. Congratulations on this!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/14/2019 6:02:00 AM

They are gorgeous Edlyn. We have a lot of them here in Hawaii. Thank you! : )

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/1/2019 10:44:00 AM

Hi Connie, your wonderful fluttering of wings has very deservedly flown to you with a win! Congratulations. Love this Haiku! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/27/2019 11:28:00 AM

Beautiful. So visual

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2019 4:43:00 PM

What beautiful imagery, Connie! I can hear those soft wings fluttering, and the cardinal's song would be a pleasure to hear. Congratulations on your deserved win! Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2019 10:55:00 AM

Connie, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku and I love the image too ~

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/19/2019 3:23:00 PM

Thank you so much for my top win Constance. Made my day! xxoo ; )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/18/2019 4:23:00 AM

Well deserved win for this perfect haiku Connie, congratulations. Tom.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/17/2019 7:39:00 PM

Beautiful, Connie. I love seeing cardinals among the pine branches, their color is such a bright spot. Congratulations!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2019 7:07:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Connie such a beautiful little poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/17/2019 6:42:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery, love cardinals, congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2019 6:41:00 PM

Great Haiku., Connie, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2019 6:26:00 PM

I really like the way you made the SOUNDS in this one, Connie. Congrats for your win.

Warren Doll

Date: 3/17/2019 3:09:00 PM

So beautiful. Congratulations on your win, Connie. All the best, Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 3:02:00 PM

- Happy winter is over, a great picture with your words Connie - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2019 5:42:00 PM

It's a joy to read such uplifting verse with wonderful imagery, Connie. Best wishes in Dear Heart's fun contest! Hugs,Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/17/2019 3:39:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn. I prefer less words but 5/7/5 was called for in her contest. I havent written haiku for some time. Enjoy St. Patrick's Day my friend! : ) xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/16/2019 4:40:00 AM

Lovely image Connie. Good luck. Tom.