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soft scarlet flutters
in winter's pristine chilled air—
a cardinal calls

 3-15-19

Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku- Poetry Contest
Sponsor Dear Heart

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Date: 4/13/2019 1:07:00 PM
LOVE IT! My favorite bird even though we don’t have them in California. Love them in red or yellow. Just a beautiful bird and you summed it up here most gracefully. Congratulations on this!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/14/2019 6:02:00 AM
They are gorgeous Edlyn. We have a lot of them here in Hawaii. Thank you! : )
Date: 4/1/2019 10:44:00 AM
Hi Connie, your wonderful fluttering of wings has very deservedly flown to you with a win! Congratulations. Love this Haiku! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/27/2019 11:28:00 AM
Beautiful. So visual
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Date: 3/18/2019 4:43:00 PM
What beautiful imagery, Connie! I can hear those soft wings fluttering, and the cardinal's song would be a pleasure to hear. Congratulations on your deserved win! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/18/2019 10:55:00 AM
Connie, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku and I love the image too ~
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/19/2019 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for my top win Constance. Made my day! xxoo ; )
Date: 3/18/2019 4:23:00 AM
Well deserved win for this perfect haiku Connie, congratulations. Tom.
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Date: 3/17/2019 7:39:00 PM
Beautiful, Connie. I love seeing cardinals among the pine branches, their color is such a bright spot. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/17/2019 7:07:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Connie such a beautiful little poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:42:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery, love cardinals, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:41:00 PM
Great Haiku., Connie, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:26:00 PM
I really like the way you made the SOUNDS in this one, Connie. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 3/17/2019 3:09:00 PM
So beautiful. Congratulations on your win, Connie. All the best, Warren
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Date: 3/17/2019 3:02:00 PM
- Happy winter is over, a great picture with your words Connie - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/16/2019 5:42:00 PM
It's a joy to read such uplifting verse with wonderful imagery, Connie. Best wishes in Dear Heart's fun contest! Hugs,Carolyn
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/17/2019 3:39:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn. I prefer less words but 5/7/5 was called for in her contest. I havent written haiku for some time. Enjoy St. Patrick's Day my friend! : ) xxoo
Date: 3/16/2019 4:40:00 AM
Lovely image Connie. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 3/15/2019 11:49:00 PM
Very lovely, Connie.
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Date: 3/15/2019 6:58:00 PM
I love this little tribute to the cardinal! I have a mamma and pappa in my back yard most mornings.
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Date: 3/15/2019 6:30:00 PM
gorgeous imagery and picture you showed us too. I did a summery haiku. Did it need to be winter?? I better check and see.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/16/2019 4:40:00 AM
No Andrea, just about nature. Tom.
Date: 3/15/2019 6:01:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Connie! Love the contest of colors in my mind! :)
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Date: 3/15/2019 5:51:00 PM
Wonderful! xomo
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Date: 3/15/2019 5:33:00 PM
Connie, vividly enchanting haiku. Perfect!
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Date: 3/15/2019 5:25:00 PM
absolutely beautiful Connie!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/15/2019 5:06:00 PM
You captured that imagery brilliantly in your poem, Connie.
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:47:00 PM
pure joy to read, best, Elsa
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