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Soft Rain I like rain, not hard, angry rain with an attitude who, was neglected by the mother cloud, and angrily show its hate towards those who had nothing to do with its misbegotten infanthood. No I´m thinking of soft rain that is like a caress, a kiss of eternities promises. And nature is still, this is a moment of rapture a longing for so long denied blissfully fulfilled. The dampness of my skullcap and my alpaca jacket is so soft that it almost feels like oil, but I know I´m just a spectator under an umbrella who ought to go home and lit the fire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/31/2012 9:16:00 AM
It is a soothing sprinkle and the anticipation of the fire ahead sounds even more so.
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Date: 10/31/2012 6:35:00 AM
Cute. Lovely, Jan. Love it. It's so romantic too, isn't it. Soft, caressing, light. Shared your enjoyment. Love ya, Toquyen
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jan oskar hansen
Date: 10/31/2012 8:38:00 AM
thank you Toquyen
Date: 10/31/2012 4:17:00 AM
It is like you gave nature emotions.
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jan oskar hansen
Date: 10/31/2012 8:39:00 AM
thank you Adria