Sasha Edl Poet Haiku

Soft Padded Paws

Soft padded paws stalk
Golden eyes glow with knowledge
Fade into darkness

Darkness eternal
Does light exist anymore?
Starving corpses wail

Hungry light feeding
Patterns appear in shadows
Soon the world is whole

A great hole appears
Cycles repeating 
Fade and back again

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 6:34 AM Congratulations Sasha on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol

Elaine George February 20, 2011 at 7:21 PM Grat String Haiku, dear Sasha. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert Pettit February 15, 2011 at 5:16 PM Congratulations on attaining honorable mention in Charles' contest.

Carolyn Devonshire February 15, 2011 at 12:20 PM A compelling poem, Sasha. Congratulations on your success in the string-haiku contest! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich February 14, 2011 at 10:49 PM Congratulations, Sasha. And I love the title you chose for your set.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 14, 2011 at 7:50 PM Congrats Sasha on your HM in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy your special honor...

John Freeman February 14, 2011 at 7:35 PM Sasha, Congratulations, on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet February 14, 2011 at 6:18 PM Congrats Sasha on your win in this contest!Enjoyed your Haiku.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 14, 2011 at 6:13 PM Congratulations on the well deserved HM win in the contest, Sasha

Joyce Johnson February 14, 2011 at 4:49 PM Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A February 2, 2011 at 5:42 PM deep write, enjoyed your haiku Sasha,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 1, 2011 at 2:42 PM Nice string of haiku with good images, Good luck, Sasha