Soft Kisses

He stared at her as she walked from the door,
he was spellbound,
and so much more,
how beautiful she was in black lace,
with a warm expression and a gentle face,
light eyes with a magnetic gaze,
it felt like he was dreaming,
and all this lost in a haze,
for a moment he thought he heard himself screaming,
but then he realized he was bound hand and foot,
he had a vision of his death,
she threw soft kisses his way,
but that was the last of the harmless play,
she cut his wrist and watched him bleed,
almost like a need,
to watch this man die,
and the secrets he held deep inside,
was all the reasons why,
then he slowly turned blue,
and his death vision, 
finally came true.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/31/2009 11:59:00 AM
effinn geeze it feels like me and my X caitlin ALL OVER IN WORD amazing i must say raw talent your so much better than me
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Date: 3/19/2009 6:08:00 AM
thanks for your comments,im glad YOU read it!:-).you write your poems and i read all,im becoming a fan of your poems,not exactly before i sleep but,because you're so good you scare me to death,you're worse then Stephen king:-),cheers- charma
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Date: 2/12/2009 5:06:00 PM
When I first started reading this, I thought it was a romance poem, then, all of a sudden things got twisted. I thought to myself, that poor man, he was so smitten by her beauty, and to find out she was horrible...I loved this, the way you took the reader through so many emotions, very clever write, always, Christy
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Date: 2/12/2009 1:01:00 PM
Hey Frank - hell of a way to go out I reckon - god Bless bro, MJ
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Date: 2/11/2009 11:50:00 AM
God loves me better so I am okay with that
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Date: 2/11/2009 6:19:00 AM
Oh yeah.. I think this fist fight is going to be beautiful.. but God has to referee.. I don't trust you LOL
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Date: 2/11/2009 6:02:00 AM
Ohh little man, never doubt,,why do you think I find you so interesting...
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Date: 2/11/2009 5:31:00 AM
I have to laugh at all the comments,but this is real good. You start out with a smooth soft toned rhyme, for what he thought was love, the vision and then went offtrack, losing the rhyme as she took his life. Excellent change over there making for like Christie said a gross, but quite enjoyable read. Michael
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Date: 2/11/2009 5:24:00 AM
Yeah I bet she's been there and done that...
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Date: 2/11/2009 5:22:00 AM
Laurie cracks me up..Frank you are at it again my friend..Rich characters that come alive with well placed words..love your stories my friend. Good work.
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Date: 2/11/2009 5:16:00 AM
Been there done that.
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