Soft Haze of June

Lying under the soft haze of June
An erotic light under heaven's full moon
Your face bright, exquisite site, I swoon

Soothing melodious notes frolic, our tune
Your hair, thick- I flick, clown, and strewn
To the beach we reach, dancing in the dune

World goes unnoticed, tornado, quake, monsoon
Nude we exude a lover's embrace, consummate spoon
As we sprawl, I recall, merging  till late afternoon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 23, 2013 at 11:26 AM
Amy CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
Mehta Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Amy
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 9:55 PM
Sweet win Amy...PD
Tideswell Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 9:33 AM
wow, what an amazing use of all those rhymes. Loved it, congratulations on your win.
Harrison Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 5:50 PM
Oh my! What an intoxicating poem Amy. I loved it. Great job.
Hickman Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 12:08 AM
very beautiful as well sensual,,a great monorhyme,,,congratulations on your win,,well deserved and Thank you for all the visits to mine and for leaving your words behind,,,Blessings..Cecil
Fraser Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Delightful images Amy, wonderful poetry. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations Amy on a worthy poem, Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fun contest. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 9:47 AM
Congrats Amy on your winning poem in the Monorhyme contest with this amazing write as I read it previously it was touching then as now....enjoy your victory and have a wonderful holiday weekend... are u entering on P.P. for their money contest? John e mailed me yesterday..luv..Linda-Marie or aka "Sweetheart"
Devonshire Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 9:07 AM
Lovely thoughts and images in this romantic write, Amy. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Foster Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 2:34 AM
Well done Amy. this was an enjoyable read...cheers Margaret
Mehta Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 8:34 PM
Nicely done monorhyme. Good luck.
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 6:38 PM
Cool one, Amy and some internal rhyme as well! Cute! Luv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 4:43 PM
My kinda poem Amy .. great one .. good luck in the contest.. my entry is "Temptation by Twilight"..need I say more? haha..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
Mills Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 4:40 PM
A loving and playful poem. Great monorhyme. Really like it-- Awesome poem. Good luck! Love, Susan
Belt Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 4:07 PM
Good one Amy.....Good Luck.....Larry
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