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Soft Creamy Chocolate Delight's

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Driving through Santa Monica as stopping at a light; standing upon the corner

The most beautiful of girls; waiting with a smile to cross unto the other side...

Hourglass her reflection in diamonds while catching my breath, as the world froze 

Icicles of desire piercing my spirit to grasp these hearts; she felt the vibes ~

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...“Soft Creamy Chocolate Delight's” *

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/10/2011 3:44:00 PM

very nice ,, very nice indeed ;} awe love's delight is always dripped from the tongue ;}

Date: 12/29/2011 4:51:00 PM

* "YESSSS MY LUV * VERY NICE * SOOOO SOFT * CREAMY & WET * YOUR PERFECT BEAUTY!!" *

Date: 12/27/2011 4:32:00 PM

* "THE DELIGHT OF YOU * MY LUV * MAKES MY MOUTH WATER * SOOOO VERY SWEEET * YOUR BEAUTY." *

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/25/2011 7:59:00 PM

Quite delightful! Thanks for the sweet comments on my poetry! :] I can feel the enchanting vibe of this poem. Always, Laura

Date: 12/30/2011 11:31:00 AM

* "I CAN FEEL YOU TOO BABY * YOU FEEL SOOOO GOOD * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV!!" *

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2011 1:38:00 AM

a delight ,, a delight and you know it.... Enjoyed stopping by your poem tonight..have a good one,..LINDA

Date: 12/25/2011 12:59:00 PM

* "SHE FELT THE VIBES * SOFT CREAMY, BEAUTIFUL LINDA * YESSSS, MY BEAUTIFUL LINDA * I DO KNOW IT * MY LUV, FOREVER * SARAH." *

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/19/2011 11:35:00 AM

: ) Thanks for the lovely coments, Sarah. Haven't been around much lately hence the delay in expressing my thanks. I will read more as time permits. Take care and have a wonderful weekend! Love, Annalie

Date: 12/30/2011 11:35:00 AM

* "OWWW TO HAVE YOUR LOVE * MY BEAUTIFUL ANNALISE * WOULD BE JUST LIKE HEAVEN * INSIDE YOUR ARMS * CHOCOLATE * PERFECT * SWEEET * BEAUTY * MY LUV." *

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/15/2011 8:41:00 AM

filling upmy senses again, sarah... i like the last line; chemistry is so alive.. wow!..:) huggs!

Date: 12/30/2011 11:40:00 AM

* "YOU * YOU ARE THE CHEMISTRY * I HAVE LOVED YOU FOR SOOOO LONG * I HAVE WANTED YOU * I WANT YOU * I NEED YOU * I LOVE YOU * NETTE, & YOU KNOW IT * YOU KNOW IT * MY BEAUTIFUL BELOVED * 'FOREVER * YOUR SARAH.'" *

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/15/2011 6:09:00 AM

Nice one...wonderful expression of a moment's connection. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)