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The boy gave a pass after sip. The connection lame - lost my grip. The fountain of suds around my sole floods. The humor and fear as I slip. On pause, as I wait for a towel. Aloof, as I cry and I howl. Surrounded, I'm stuck in pond like a duck. This murderous flip's not too foul. The youth, he's ashamed and he hides. and knowingly, I do not chide. I find and I hug, I smile and I shrug. This Gram thus takes slicks all in stride. 8/18/2019 *All too true of a story! One sip, then an entire can of sprite spills out of the can. A scary accident! Thankfully I'm fine and the four year old was not hurt!

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Date: 8/26/2019 1:48:00 PM
Cute limerick & well done
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Date: 8/25/2019 4:53:00 PM
Sigh. Your wise actions probably constituted a turning-point in this four-year-old's life. Thank God! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2019 4:56:00 PM
I know what it feels like! He’s a little sweetheart. Thanks, Gershon! <3
Date: 8/23/2019 2:29:00 AM
Sometimes the best memories are memories like these, Kim. Although at the time they might have not seemed extremely funny, this will be a family tale told often with loud laughter! Great job!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2019 4:55:00 PM
I was on all fours laughing and crying at the same time...lol! Thanks, friend!
Date: 8/20/2019 1:37:00 PM
You handled the situation with humor so well Kim! Keep enjoying life!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2019 3:01:00 PM
Thanks, Smita!
Date: 8/19/2019 9:06:00 PM
It sounds like a truly wild adventure. Sometimes surprises are just surprises.. hehe. (sending you a little duck to swim in the pond...) Ann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2019 9:08:00 PM
So glad I didn’t get hurt! Always an adventure! Hugs...Kim
Date: 8/19/2019 5:52:00 PM
nicely told, kim! i just spent a weekend with the grandkids and wiped up quite a few spills...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2019 9:07:00 PM
Might as well turn our spills into a poem :) Hugs...Kim
Date: 8/19/2019 5:15:00 PM
Thankfully Kim a happy ending, but something you could have done without. Tom. Great lims.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2019 9:03:00 PM
So scary! Thanks, Tom!

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