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Sock It To Me Spring

O breezy Spring leaves, Show-offs of stupendous beauty. Your breathtaking heights and swooning low brights, Puffy delights As you bud and sway. You delightfully chill me Goosebumps on arms and brace. Fingertips are nearly blue, brazenly so on this Spring-a-ling day. An open space, front door unhinged, ready to be sanded and stained. I’ll swing a jacket about my shoulders and sock up my feet. Sock it to me, Spring! I will spring into action that is if I can retract my wiggly fingers back from the letters leaping onto white space. Reminds me of the swoosh of beach - its tremendous peaks. Not a damaging Spring but quite mischievous!

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Date: 4/17/2024 11:20:00 AM
Wow. Written from a totally original angle. Meaning in every word, as they jump out to be heard.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2024 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, David! :)
Date: 4/16/2024 9:47:00 PM
Ah, just loving your style, the stylish Kim- <3 xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2024 4:39:00 AM
Thank you, Paige :)
Date: 4/14/2024 7:21:00 PM
Mischief-makers can land some real 'haymakers.' ~ Farmer John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 9:02:00 PM
LOL! Watch out for Grant Wood’s pitchfork ;)
Date: 4/14/2024 12:13:00 PM
This is a very fun poem. Well written Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 4/14/2024 10:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I love spring time. I wish it would last longer... Have a very blessed day/week writing away..........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!Blessings!
Date: 4/13/2024 5:16:00 PM
delightful poem, spring is an adventure but you seems ready, enjoyed yann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2024 7:33:00 PM
Thank you, Yann!
Date: 4/13/2024 9:23:00 AM
This is a delightful celebration of the arrival of spring! Your words dance like the breeze through freshly blooming leaves, capturing the exuberance and energy of the season. I love how you weave together sensations of cold and warmth, from the Goosebumps on arms to the nearly blue fingertips, compared with the anticipation of outdoor activities and the playful imagery of sanding and staining a front door.. It's a joy to read such evocative and vibrant verses.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2024 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! I appreciate your comment! ~ Kim
Date: 4/13/2024 5:33:00 AM
I loved this write - sock it to me Spring -;do your best to knock me out with your beauty but you are. - not a damaging Spring but quite mischievous -a tav for my poetry file. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2024 9:08:00 AM
So glad you liked this one, Jennifer! :)
Date: 4/12/2024 9:17:00 PM
You have painted such a beautiful picture in your Spring poem that one would love to enjoy it like the first shower of rains. You have brought the joy of Spring season very close to witness it though your words dear friend Kim. I am making it a favourite poem of mine. Thanks once again for visiting my new poems df. With best wishes always....Ravindra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2024 9:07:00 AM
So happy you liked and faved my poem! Blessings :)
Date: 4/12/2024 4:24:00 PM
such a delightful read...full of spring time energy. I liked "Spring-a-ling day." My evening is warm like spring after having read your poem. Have a great evening, blessings, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2024 9:06:00 AM
So glad my poem tapped into warm Spring feelings :) Blessings ~ Kim
Date: 4/12/2024 12:54:00 PM
There is a great joy expressed in this spring poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2024 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 4/12/2024 10:19:00 AM
Delightful, Kim...I love a good "Spring-a-ling day".
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2024 1:15:00 PM
Thank you! Have a blessed Spring day!
Date: 4/12/2024 10:16:00 AM
"I can retract my wiggly fingers back from the letters leaping onto white space." -- love it! Wiggle away.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2024 1:19:00 PM
Glad you liked it, Joe! Thank you!

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