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The odd sock Poetry Contest Sponsored by Natasha L Scragg 04/07/24

 

SOCK IT TO ME



Once we were a matching pair, some days we’d get downbeat as we both couldn't abide the stench of sweaty cheesy feet! Our male owner would pop us in the washing machine with warm soapy suds we’d soon smell fresh and clean But now my ‘sole mate’ has gone missing and I am bereft I was worn on the right foot, and he was worn on the left Our owner removed the washing machine gasket then checked the tumble drier and laundry basket Alas my companion is still missing, life just isn’t fair a single sock is useless, and I’m filled with despair So my owner’s sock stock has now been depleted and with my partner gone I’m feeling de-feeted! What use is one sock, maybe one day I’ll be ‘heeled’ if the sock monster’s secret stash is suddenly revealed! So for now I am consigned to the back of a drawer with other odd socks and I'm sure there’ll be lots more!
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Rigoler Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 7:22 PM
Cleverly written, Jan., with good word play. Wish I had written it. / Maurice
Goldsmith Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations on your win.  A creative/fun write. Life just isn’t fair for a sock to be filled with despair. Hahaha!!! Enjoy your day writing away............
May Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:22 AM
Very nicely penned Jan, Congrats on your win, hugs
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 3:02 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jan :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Fun! … So my owner’s sock stock has now been depleted and with my partner gone I’m feeling de-feeted…Congratulations, Jan!
Peranteau Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 7:11 AM
I thought that I smelled the pungent odor in your room here Jan ;) I feel the breeze dear poet; ya got a hole sum wherez...oops ,) knock'n me out...(with your write jan ;) have the great day...')
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 1:18 PM
very cleverly done, Jan, and I really liked the play on some of your words!
Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 3:47 AM
I have got a drawer that is occupied with socks that have no mate. This one reminds me I need to clean it out because the mates are gone forever. I wonder how a person can lose a sock when they never leave the house. LOL..I really enjoyed your creative talent in this one. It reads like a great contender for the contest(I guess it must be a contest) to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Edmonds  Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:26 PM
A very amusing read Jan, love it… Beryl
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:33 AM
So cute including title! Love your “cheesy” humor! Hugs, Jan!
Rodgers Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Dear Jan, your whimsical poem about the plight of a lone sock is both humorous and relatable. The playful tone and clever wordplay bring to life the frustration and absurdity of losing a sock's mate. I loved how the imagery of the sock's journey from being a matching pair to being relegated to the back of a drawer is poignant and amusing. This is such a delightful piece that brings a smile and a nod of understanding. Blessings, Daniel
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:26 AM
Daniel your detailed descriptive comments are a joy to read, thank you so much for supporting my writing, I am so glad you found the poem amusing:-) hugs Jan xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 4:16 AM
Nicely done Jan with some great word plays, apparently odd socks make a great weapon in prison when filled with snooker balls, (I’m not sure if that’s a good thing though) lol! Top one for the contest, cheers David
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:20 AM
eek i can imagine the damage done with that weapon in a confined space - sounds like prison isn't the punishment for some if they have games rooms lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:03 AM
Quite a fun poem, dear Jan. xx
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Thanks Victor, it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 12:56 AM
hahaha loved this
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:18 AM
aww Thanks Arthur, It is SO SO good to see you back:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 10:31 PM
Lol, good one Jan, if you find out where the odd socks go, let me know. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:18 AM
It's like the Bermuda triangle mystery Tom! :-) hugs Jan xx
Greenhough Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:18 PM
This was a very creative poem. It flowed effortlessly to its sad ending. Good luck with the contest.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:17 AM
Thanks Hilda:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:28 PM
- A fun contest, Jan ... excellent contribution as usual :) - Best wishes :) - Have a lovely new week :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:16 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Bowring Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:55 PM
Dear Jan, this is so amusing, brilliantly written and very clever. I felt quite sorry for the bereft little sock. Awesome word play, flow and rhyme. Love ‘sole mate’ ‘ de-feeted’, heeled’ - genius! A very entertaining read from your skilled pen and I’m sure this will do very well in the contest. It made me smile and chuckle. Loved it. Hugs xx
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 4:01 PM
Thanks Christina, I couldn't resist a few sock puns lol:-) glad I made you smile:-) hugs Jan xx
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