Society's Invisible People

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She sat on the pavement as the world walked by 
She's just another  vagrant not a mum  a daughter or wife
Claiming state benefits and living the high  life ?
Sat on the pavement , a  discharged mental patient .

She sat on a park bench as the world walked by 
The office she once managed on the skyline
A bottle of cheap merlot gripped in her hand
sat on the park bench, just another  alcoholic hitting the wine

She's sat in the squat, drug syringe in hand 
with a twinge of regret she injects her right  arm
as the cries of her baby  can be heard in a far of room
Sat in her squat, just a drug addict hitting the highs. 

invisible people all need to be  helped 
A simple good morning is all that it takes
a free coffee a sandwich or even a pound
they are people with feeling, lets give them a hand  .   




26042016  comp entry  the invisible people I think of are real,just ignored by society and left to drown in their addictions 

COMP ENTRY 24042016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/27/2017 2:53:00 PM
You are very compassionate Stephen it so sad to see them being controlled by their addictions:-( By the way the audio isn't working, it seems to be a general problem across soup:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/21/2016 5:35:00 AM
Amazing. I have come back to rate. 7.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 7/21/2016 11:36:00 AM
many thanks steve , you see it to often, I live in a small town you did'nt see homeless you do now
Date: 5/9/2016 4:12:00 PM
such a compassionate and beautiful poem, congrats on your win
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/10/2016 6:37:00 AM
many thanks broken wings coming from such a wordsmith thank you stephen
Date: 5/9/2016 5:39:00 AM
A challenging piece..... Congrats Stephen, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/9/2016 6:20:00 AM
many thanks teddy for stopping by and reading my poem stephen
Date: 5/9/2016 5:29:00 AM
A challenging piece..... Congrats Stephen, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/8/2016 6:42:00 PM
stephen, Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/9/2016 12:50:00 AM
many thanks and good to have pd back x
Date: 5/8/2016 4:57:00 PM
Hello Stephen, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog, "American Dream." if you'd like. Hope you are enjoying your day. Happy Mother's Day **SKAT**
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/9/2016 12:51:00 AM
many thanks skat will do x
Date: 4/25/2016 6:55:00 PM
Good title and i like the flow.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/26/2016 1:16:00 AM
Many thanks written for a competition but the sentiment very true there is an invisible society .stephen
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