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Soaring

Have you ever imagined the feeling Of soaring above the clouds Only the breeze between you and the earth Away from the bustling crowds With the sound of the fiery blast That keeps your airship afloat An oh so peaceful, heavenly solitude As you sail this celestial boat Imagine the absolute total serenity As you take in the breathtaking view Corn fields that go on forever and ever Mountains that reach for the blue Drifting skyward on a gentle breeze Over the clouds you soar A feeling of serenity and inner peace Emanates from every pore

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Date: 9/12/2023 4:21:00 PM
I just love the uplifting quality of your words....I could truly imagine what you were suggesting...the idea of drifting skyward on a gentle breeze does sound serene and peaceful. Nicely done, Jack!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/13/2023 7:53:00 AM
I can only imagine the exhilarating feeling... free from earth's boundaries!!!! xox
Date: 9/12/2023 12:53:00 PM
This poem sprinkles serenity and beauty..The beauty of flying high in the sky,floating on clouds..and enjoying the beauty of it all..Lovely
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/12/2023 2:56:00 PM
Serenity and beauty... yes! Love to hear from you again Charmaine! Jack xx

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