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Bubble Dreams

I climbed a moonlit bubble to touch the midnight sky slipped into tie dyed memories of carefree days gone by. I bathed inside the prisms of soapy bubble dreams and floated through a tranquil, iridescent scene. I flung the baggage of reality over the crescent moon embraced visions of utopia and began my life anew. I exited excuses to experience ecstasies of hope hunted truth like a monk on a mission to meet the pope. I soared upon a seagull's wings to hear a sailor's song euphoric in my jubilee while dolphins sang along. I touched the outer edges of a sunburst flame spread sparks of love to everyone on that enchanted day. Written on 3/5/2017

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Date: 11/6/2018 11:33:00 PM
Whatever your taking , I want some :) Jk Enjoyed your contributions this evening.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/7/2018 11:12:00 AM
Much of my more fanciful poetry comes to me between sleeping and waking! The mind can be funny that way! Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 3/13/2018 8:23:00 PM
This is lovely, Laura; what a great idea. Congrats on your win.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/13/2018 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes :)
Date: 3/13/2018 1:13:00 PM
Hi Laura...soap bubble dreams are bound to burst, but this creative poem will definitely pass the test of time! Congratulations on placing first:) Regards // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/13/2018 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 3/12/2018 6:16:00 PM
Enchanting, to dream a dream of bubbles. Then let them carry you away to Utopia where you start your life anew. To spread love and happiness as Utopians do. Never soared on a seagulls wing but have heard the dolphins sing. Twas one stop before paradise, Malta a small island with such a big heart. Sadly now a distant memory, but it was not by choice we had to part. Your poem a fantasy flash fiction at its best, up there in 1st place a winner with the best, congratulations Laura... Mick
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/13/2018 1:08:00 PM
Hi Mick, your lovely mention of Malta drew my attention...that small island is where I live:) // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/12/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thanks so much for your great comments and kind words, Mick! I'm so glad you enjoyed my whimsical poem... :)
Date: 3/12/2018 6:03:00 PM
Thank you for sharing that experience. Congratulations Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/12/2018 6:30:00 PM
Thanks, P.M.! So glad you liked this whimsical poem :)
Date: 3/12/2018 3:17:00 PM
A whimsical delight. Very uplifting. Congrats on your well deserved top honours, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/12/2018 4:07:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, Line! I am thrilled that you liked this one :)
Date: 3/12/2018 2:58:00 PM
Lovely verse Laura. Congratulations.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/12/2018 4:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom! Glad you liked this :)
Date: 3/7/2017 9:08:00 AM
I enjoyed floating on your whimsical bubbles.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. Glad you liked it. :)
Date: 3/6/2017 1:12:00 AM
i'm soaking in your wonderful write, laura... winning wishes and huggs!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/6/2017 2:37:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed my loopy poetry, Nette! Thanks :)
Date: 3/5/2017 9:11:00 PM
I want some of that bath soap Laura. Good luck in the contest, I think...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/5/2017 10:28:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie...and yes, it's for Kai's contest. :)

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