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So Swiftly

Smoky odour of burning wood, Aches me this foggy morning Sun shines at noon, Just as bright as it did before, Then near evening it flows down, like water It all happened so swiftly I couldn't notice, The fire go out, and the smell fade away All that's there is the memory of the remaining ash

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Date: 2/3/2024 4:56:00 PM
wow, powerfully descriptive and a captivating read. Thanks for capturing that moment and sharing it with us. Have a great evening, Sara
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 3/3/2024 9:22:00 PM
Thank you :)

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