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So Subtle the Storm

stir distant rumbles zig zag wink heat lightning's zaps-- sheets of rain scream down May 21, 2019 Entry in Writing Challenge 3, May 2019 Nature Haiku Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2019 9:41:00 PM

Beautiful image , Gershon, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2019 11:20:00 AM

Thank you so much for noticing, Eve! And congrats to you for your big win with 'Mockingbird Love Song' in the same contest. I can just picture that 'bachelor' warbling away on a hot, humid summer's night, as you depicted it. Best wishes, Gershon

Constance La France

Date: 5/27/2019 9:23:00 AM

Gershon congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/27/2019 1:54:00 PM

...And thank YOU once again for your good counsel. You truly do live up to your pen name! Appreciated. :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2019 2:57:00 PM

Oh i love the screaming of the rain at the end. Clever! Congrats on the win.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2019 3:21:00 PM

I guess you might want to call this a 'scream of a Haiku.' LOL... Thank you so much for viewing this one and for the enthusiasm, Andrea! AND congrats to you on your top win in the same contest! Best wishes, Gershon