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So Subtle the Storm

stir distant rumbles

  zig zag wink heat lightning's zaps--

    sheets of rain scream down


          
           May 21, 2019
 Entry in Writing Challenge 3, May 2019
        Nature Haiku Contest
         Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Eve Roper Date: 5/27/2019 9:41:00 PM Beautiful image , Gershon, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 5/28/2019 11:20:00 AM Thank you so much for noticing, Eve! And congrats to you for your big win with 'Mockingbird Love Song' in the same contest. I can just picture that 'bachelor' warbling away on a hot, humid summer's night, as you depicted it. Best wishes, Gershon

Constance La France Date: 5/27/2019 9:23:00 AM Gershon congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 5/27/2019 1:54:00 PM ...And thank YOU once again for your good counsel. You truly do live up to your pen name! Appreciated. :) gw

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/26/2019 2:57:00 PM Oh i love the screaming of the rain at the end. Clever! Congrats on the win. Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 5/26/2019 3:21:00 PM I guess you might want to call this a 'scream of a Haiku.' LOL... Thank you so much for viewing this one and for the enthusiasm, Andrea! AND congrats to you on your top win in the same contest! Best wishes, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/26/2019 1:20:00 PM - Returns with a congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 5/26/2019 1:34:00 PM Appreciated, Anne-Lise. Thanks for noticing. :) gw

Kurt Ravidas Date: 5/26/2019 12:24:00 PM Oh, it's a zig zag lightning fav. Congrats, Wolf) Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 5/26/2019 1:34:00 PM Zig-zag ZAP! Thank you for your encouraging words, as always, Comrade Kurt. ~ Volkov

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/22/2019 7:24:00 PM - Well done, Gershon :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 5/22/2019 8:53:00 PM Thank you for your good wishes for this haiku, Anne-Lise. Blessings, gw

Hilo Poet Date: 5/22/2019 8:08:00 AM Loudly echoed GW--engaging realism of this little gem, Aloha wk Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 5/22/2019 9:09:00 AM Thank you for your kind words and your support, William! :) gw

M. L. Kiser Date: 5/21/2019 2:39:00 PM Sometimes, they do seem to be, "screaming" down. Good one. Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 5/21/2019 6:52:00 PM I'm trying my best on these haikus. They certainly do not come 'NATURE-ally' to me. :) gw