So Many Times

just one more beer
time for me to go
do i want another?

i missed the bus
wobble home on foot
will she still be awake?

i lost my keys
no sneaking in now
anyone got earplugs?

For contest 'Quesionku 2', sponsor Richard Lamoreaux
20th October 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Shahein Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Beautiful poem my friend, I hope you win....Enjoyed reading it... :D
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Thanks, Dalia. Viv x
Canerdy Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:51 AM
This guy has something worse than a hangover awaiting him! Good job--Congratulations! Janice
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:57 PM
hell hath no fury...... thanks for dropping by, Janice. Viv x
Haight Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:13 AM
Ha Ha! Really enjoyed this, Viv. Very clever theme. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Thanks Sandra, I live to drink another day. Viv x
Cheema Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Loved your humour! Congrats Viv on your win!
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Thanks Balveen, and well done you, too. Regards, Viv
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Haha... congratulations on your win, Viv..!!!!
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Thanks Eve. A fun contest. Viv x
Sergi Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Hi Viv: Congrats on a funny win!
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Thanks, Ralph, appreciate you dropping by. Regards, Viv
Carmack Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 9:23 PM
I would have slept in the car. Congrats Viv.
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:22 AM
I would have had to buy a car, Rob. Now that's what I call an expensive night out. Regards, Viv
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 5:07 PM
glad to see this with a great win, Viv!
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:21 AM
Thanks, Andrea, a fun form to work with. Glad you liked it. Viv x
Godwin Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 3:01 PM
(have you found that pesky cat yet?) Very clever little ditty is your qu - congratulations ... CayCay
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:21 AM
She's been out all night, just popped in for a snack (it's 05:20a.m here) and has shot off out again. Probably cocktails with the girls. Or should that be mice tails? Viv x
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 2:33 PM
Your witty questionku have done you proud, Viv! Pleased to be back with merited congratulations!! ~ Prosit! // paul
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:20 AM
Thanks Paul, very kiind of you. Hope you're well. Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 1:35 PM
always love your humour Mr Viv congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:19 AM
Thanks Jan, I sometimes wonder how I've survived this long. Ah, that's it- beer. Viv x
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 12:24 PM
Thanks for entering my contest Viv. Congrats!
Wigley Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 12:40 PM
Thanks Richard, and many thanks for your inventive form, a refreshing change. Regards,Viv
Tor Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Viv congratulations on your deserved win!!
Wigley Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 12:41 PM
Cheers Michael, good fun, and an interesting diversion. Regards, Viv
Leiser Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Good one, Viv! Very funny :)
Wigley Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 5:02 PM
Thanks aura. I try to be home by nine nowadays. Nine being September x
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 9:03 PM
cute way to do the contest, Viv. These are fun!
Wigley Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 5:01 PM
Thanks, Andrea, yes, a fun form to dance with. Viv x
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:54 PM
A lovely string of questionku, Viv; just your luck missing the bus and losing your keys. Will earplugs suffice!:) // paul
Wigley Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 7:49 PM
I believe that the telling off that football manager Alex Ferguson used to give his players was known as 'the hair drier'. Very apt. regards, Viv
Richards Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:19 PM
Ha !!! You devil, you !! A night out with the guys only gets you into trouble with the missus !! Cute questionku !!
Wigley Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 7:50 PM
It used to, Carrie, but I've been fine since I discovered a solution to it- I now drink at lunchtime. Viv x
Nunez Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 9:17 AM
lol! Goodluck! With her and the contest... :-)
Wigley Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 12:04 PM
I may just have to build a pub in the garden, Kim. Less pain. Viv x
Konos Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 6:55 AM
that's a big LOL....let us hear the continuation of when you awoke the next morning....hmmmmm .......
Wigley Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Thanks, Judy. A sequel would probably be set in a kennel. Viv x
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 6:02 AM
Baa haa haa!... Good lick in the contest my friend!!..
Wigley Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Thanks, Arlene, Viv x
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:06 AM
i like this.. really naughty and sharp, viv.. mine is quite serious!.. huggs
Wigley Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 2:12 AM
I came home without my keys last week. my left ear is still twice the size of my right. I look like a Mister Potato head that's been left near a fire. Viv x
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