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So Lovely Is a Storm

So lovely is a summer storm, the lightning of the day
The majesty of thunder's rolling might
The melody of nature's song, the sweet, enduring way
Of rainfall on my window pane at night

from:  The Rain, the Park, the One I Love
submitted on:  October 6, 2020
to:  The Rithimus Divisa 8 Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/9/2020 10:14:00 PM
Enjoyed your nature write, Bryan. A summer storm really puts on a show with its strobe lights, sound track, and "the melody of nature's song". Congrats on your podium win ~ John
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Date: 10/8/2020 9:04:00 AM
Congrats Bryan on a nice win!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/8/2020 5:24:00 PM
Thank you, John. Take care, my friend.
Date: 10/8/2020 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning lines, Bryan. Your vision of storms is so very well expressed.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/8/2020 5:26:00 PM
Thank you. I love storms. It is a pleasure to write about them. Have a good one.
Date: 10/8/2020 12:00:00 AM
Beautiful rhythm, wonderful word choice and phrasing, gorgeous imagery, one of my favorite muses, simple yet stunning beauty - this is an exquisite write, and I kept reading it over-and-over. Congratulations, my friend, so deserving! :o)
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/8/2020 5:31:00 PM
Such kind words. Thank you very much. I appreciate the time and effort you put into reviewing our submissions, as evidenced by your thoughtful reflections. Take care, my friend!
Date: 10/6/2020 2:00:00 PM
this is very beautiful, Bryan!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/8/2020 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, and congratulations on your top win!
Date: 10/6/2020 12:11:00 PM
Hello Bryan Norton, I enjoy the rain in the evening, I enjoy to listen to the raindrops hitting the window sill and pane. To hear the rain fall on the roof is relaxing to me. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2020 11:48:00 AM
Hello Bryan Norton, yes i I am glad that we enjoy the same things. I enjoy the storm on a hot humid day. Same for you.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/8/2020 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. I'm glad to know we enjoy the same things. Nothing beats a storm on a hot summer day! May you know many more.

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