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So I Dance For You

| So I dance for you | Awaiting I'm fixating upon my breath, becoming translucent between the day, If I could only reach those sea of stars that light. But, why each twilight passes you promise to stay? Thereupon, keep me hidden under your night. But, under the solitude scorching rays, I'm burning. I ricochet along the ocean mist, but I'm descending. So, I turn to your dark, still yearning. Lost without your touch, with the winds weeping whispers, I perdure bending. Our symphonic souls sensually skim between dusk. Every phase you show me, I'll face. Your cataclysmic craters secure me deep with trust. Our sweet starbound surroundings embrace, I long to taste. You watch me from a distance as I dance. Moving with each beat of your cool moonlight, in a trance.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/16/2023 5:10:00 AM

Absolutely stunning debut poem, Daisy! Yeah, I'm definitely giving you a follow. Welcome to Poetrysoup!

Tom Woody

Date: 9/8/2023 6:46:00 AM

That's a dance I'd like to see, in full moonlight. Good stuff and welcome to PS Daisy

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/10/2023 8:14:00 PM

Thank you Tom for your kind thoughts and warm welcome to this community

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/8/2023 4:57:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive lines penned in this one that dances along the night just above the ocean's spray. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/10/2023 8:15:00 PM

Gracious you read my peace and a pleasure to me you. Thank you for your kind words

Valsa George

Date: 9/8/2023 4:35:00 AM

So, one more talented poet has come to join poetry soup ! welcome dear friend! Thank you for visiting my page ."But, under the solitude scorching rays, I'm burning. I ricochet along the ocean mist, but I'm descending." Great lines, great imagery !

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/10/2023 8:16:00 PM

Oh thank you so much Valsa, I feel so welcomed already, another amazing place to express. Thank you for your sweet comment.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/8/2023 2:04:00 AM

Oh my, dear Daisy, I'm so happy to see you here, it's so good to be reading your beautiful poems here too and what a beautiful first piece for PS! This is absolutely breathtaking with so many gorgeous and descriptive lines.. "Becoming translucent between the day", "why each twilight passes you promise to stay" So vulnerable and aching.. "I ricochet along the ocean mist" Wow "our sweet starbound surroundings embrace" A stunningly crafted modern sonnet.. Love your wordplay so much :)

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/10/2023 8:20:00 PM

Oh I chuckled like a school girl when I've glimpsed at you all the poets and friends here. It's really cool to see poets spread their wings through other social means, another perfect place to express. Thank you dearest Hiya for your lovely message and warmest welcome.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/7/2023 8:35:00 AM

Although you depart from the usual rules of Shakespearean and Italian sonnet, your muse is interesting and you do not have to follow the rules.

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/7/2023 7:32:00 PM

Thank you so much. I'm definitely still on a learning curb on all the different poetic forms and structures. So much fun to have and learn

Silent One

Date: 9/7/2023 2:52:00 AM

Hey it's PG.. Glad to see you here, nice to see many of Inks friends and followers join this domain... You sonnet is an interesting one, the rhymes seem like slant rhymes and its in the mould of modern sonnet... some great lines here, especially the one about symphonic souls... hope you enjoy yourself on here..

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/7/2023 8:00:00 PM

Thank you as always for your lovely feedback and it is so great to see you PG, Ink, and so many others and to be able read all your collection of poems. So grateful for your support and it's good to find another place to express

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/7/2023 1:44:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Thanks likewise for sharing your talent... Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/7/2023 8:06:00 PM

What a beautiful warm greeting Beata, it's truly made my day. I appreciate your kindness and I'm happy to have found this place that's filled with so many friends I know and more to make. Can't wait to read your poetry.

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 9/6/2023 11:16:00 PM

"Lost without your touch, with the winds weeping whispers, I perdure bending...." Kind of racy, I like it. But then I've got such a warped mind. A beautiful romantic write full of sensual imprints. The whole poem, visions of goddesses dancing the 7 veils before the ghosts of their absent lover/s.

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/7/2023 8:18:00 PM

Oh yeah! I love the way your thinking, and enjoy how a poem can take so many different meanings and movements. I'm awestruck of your uplifting and charismatic comment and am thankful you stopped by to read my piece. I'm already knee-deep into your poetry and can't wait to dive into more. Thank you, Labyrinth

Ink Empress

Date: 9/6/2023 11:00:00 PM

Oh my beautiful island poetess, how good to see you write a sonnet and also an oceanic one that flows with such sublime rhymes in a melodious flow. I truly love so many lines in this, and how heartfelt it is, touched my soul. Its so good to see you posting here too on soup, and i hope to see you try out my contest and other contests too here. I just posted under blogs too. And i hope many will reach you and support you. So happy to have you.

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/7/2023 8:30:00 PM

Who better to inspire me especially with sea filled analogies & metaphors as you my beautiful friend. Its so good to see you write and express your marvelled poetry here. And I'm definitely going to try your contest and soup up your blogs here, I just have to work my way around here. Thank you again for always shining luminous and lifting my spirits Ink.

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/7/2023 8:26:00 PM