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So I Asked the Lad

so i asked the lad he was at work with his mother she manages a laundromat where one may only need machines but there is a service of clean and fold for us single elderly gentlemen what is your favorite candy bar snickers he replied and what flower is your favorite hmmm.... i like roses and when is your birthday another answer fulfilled now said i of those questions what are your mother's answers to such questions he paused, soon lost in the brain before i let his wandering within go on i told him, well young man let me impart something of value here if you ever meet the woman you dream of a life with forever never fail to know these it is how a woman knows you truly love her and always remember in life it is the little things that adds up to the greatest leaving Lufkin, Texas i like to think i made a small difference in the life of a young man watching his mother fold and prepare my clothes but more so the lesson mom heard her smile as i left OKC 9/22

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Date: 9/20/2022 8:09:00 AM
I love this Timothy..everything about it ! Such wisdom in the shadows of a few moments in time. The ending says it all. Your heart and intentions are beautiful in this poem. A fav.Blessings, Susan :)
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Date: 9/19/2022 12:34:00 PM
you've told this story quite beautifully, timothy. it will stay with me...
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Date: 9/19/2022 11:15:00 AM
Brilliant! No flowery language, just flowery, meaningful thought guided by experience combined with acquired intelligence. We all have this beautiful like capacity, most of us, but not enough of us partake. Sad, for to do so is not really that difficult, as you being honestly you (a brave trait) give such fine example, combining a feeling heart with a feeling loving soul. You get a Fav! from me. Great read.
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Date: 9/19/2022 9:51:00 AM
this grew out of a poem Suzanne Delaney sent me by Lindsay Laurie....that is how it works...the lines of a colleague often take us deeper into ourselves and as Sherlock Holmes says....the clue was always there we just needed the right circumstances to reveal it...and that is because we sojourn on the same path as one soul....
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/20/2022 6:39:00 PM
Who knew I would inspire this simple memory. Knowledge inside that only need a simple spark to reignite it. The little things are the biggest treasures I so agree. Love it. Wisdom unfolds like a flower. SuZ

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