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So Gentle Is the Morn

So gentle is the morn in spring as tender as the rose whose dewdrop petals long to bring their beauty to expose. The warm sunlight and fresh spring air, the breeze is blowing in our hair. The warm sunlight… the warm sunlight invigorates a day so fair. So gentle is the morn in spring in nature’s outdoor room; the butterflies are fluttering from bloom to lovely bloom to pollinate the flowers need and spread their beauty with it’s seed. To pollinate… to pollinate the budding love that will proceed. So gentle is the morn in spring like coos of mourning dove while calling for his mate to bring exciting lilts of love. I long to feel so young again while strolling in the April rain; I long to feel… I long to feel the tender notes of love’s refrain. April 9, 2020

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Date: 4/29/2020 10:16:00 AM
I love this refreshing write, just what we need, how I long for spring. I especially enjoyed the repeating lines gives it a song-like feel which I enjoy! Well done John
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/30/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thanks so much, John, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 4/17/2020 1:21:00 PM
So beautifully penned and constructed. Wonderful piece John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2020 11:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kenneth, I appreciate it. John
Date: 4/17/2020 12:33:00 PM
Such a beautiful season you write about John, one thing when this is over we'll really appreciate what nature has to offer. Stay safe. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2020 11:06:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, with all that's going on around us, I thought a refreshing spring poem was in order. Glad you enjoyed it. Stay safe my friend. John
Date: 4/17/2020 6:21:00 AM
What a refreshing poem. The imagery was beautiful. I especially liked the repeating lines. One longs to bask in such a scene. Blessings and thanks for visiting my humble write.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2020 10:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eileen, with all that is going on around us now, I thought we needed something light and refreshing. John
Date: 4/16/2020 1:23:00 PM
Excellent poetry, John; such a joy to read and image. Great read to start the day bright and hopeful.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2020 10:33:00 AM
Joe, thanks so much for your thoughts and comments, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 4/13/2020 5:18:00 PM
Lovely poem! I like the repetition of of certain lines that give a unique emphasis of your thoughts. Stay safe.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/13/2020 5:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, JCB, I'm glad you enjoyed it. You stay safe too. Hugs, John
Date: 4/12/2020 6:00:00 PM
Utterly gorgeous. Smooth flowing poetry.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/12/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 4/9/2020 11:35:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/11/2020 6:41:00 AM
Thank you, Sheri, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Date: 4/9/2020 11:24:00 PM
Filled with so many aspects of the lovely spring day we dream about all winter. The sun's warmth, the flowers blooming, love budding. Great write, John and congrats on your win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/11/2020 6:39:00 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 4/9/2020 5:35:00 PM
I see the butterflies gently pollinating, and I think how lovely you captured this John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/9/2020 9:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, I appreciate it. John
Date: 4/9/2020 3:51:00 PM
This poem is as lovely as a spring morning. I never thought about a spring morning coming with a gentle touch, not like a fierce appearance in winter, but with soft persistence bringing us out of our sleep. I really like the repeating lines at the end of each stanza. Nice touch.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/9/2020 9:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Sam, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 4/9/2020 2:03:00 PM
A smooth write...lovely imagery
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/9/2020 9:40:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo, I appreciate it.
Date: 4/9/2020 11:33:00 AM
"So gentle is the morn" Yes, indeed it is. Your thoughts take my breath away. This is so beautiful and romantic. I love the way your words caress the page, with such elegance and grace. Simply breathtaking. I wish to place this in my favorites. Because. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/9/2020 9:35:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Brandy, I appreciate you. Thank you for the fave. I hope your muse finds you soon. Hugs, John

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