So Far Away (11)

How can i behold your face again
when my eyes are ladden with tears?
How shall i hear the rushing wind of your voice
when my ears are deafened 
by the silence within?

How shall i ever fondle your face  again,
when my arms are withered by solitude?

At dawn i can not find you.
At noon i listen in vain for your laughter.
In the night season, my forlorn heart sighs
as it would its last.

The moon`s probing eye finds a way to my heart.
It is your reflection 
that stretches in the dust.

Where once i had summer
i now have winter.
Your love which i once have felt
i now can feel no more.

You re so far away.
...so far away.
...so far away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/4/2015 11:26:00 PM
Wow! this is excellent write Good work.
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Date: 7/5/2009 7:08:00 PM
wow this is lovely. thanx 4 ur comment, i am taking ur advice and drying my ;)
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Date: 4/10/2009 10:39:00 PM
excellent write,i don't know how i missed outy on this one-bravo as always-Happy Easter weekend to you and yours;-)-CHARMA
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Date: 1/26/2009 2:52:00 PM
Ahhhhh is that what the cock is doing with his doodle do? Announcing the hen's creation! I'd love to believe this one kind sir. The above poem is excellent in the emotion it evokes in the reader. "k k" Would you concider capitalizing your "I's" You deserve the important state capitalization denotes in verse and language. Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 1/26/2009 2:33:00 PM
Hmmm, this is lovely. Seems to reflect a situation i am in. Well written, poet. :D
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