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So Easy To Forget

I commend you, my ethereal love: you’ve forgotten me so well My name was written with invisible ink on your heart Erase ... evaporate Our love was steamy mist on the bathroom mirror, and you took a dry toweled tear and wiped it away I ask you, were we so easy to forget? For me, it was hard to remember just why we split Something or another about this and that Having a dinner conversation, you were casting aspersions, saying a real man don’t treat a woman like crap But, if I recall correctly, it was your friend and her fella you were talking about When it came to us, we always labored hard to try and work things out But we got lax, too comfortable with our facial familiarity I took your love for granted, and you did the same with me We let the little bothersome things slide, we let the small cracks grow wide Now, we’re no longer together, and I really don’t know exactly why Or what truly caused the divide With sorrowful parting, I ask myself why ... why ... why did our love die?! As it takes everything within me to stifle my muffled manly cries It hurt me to see there wasn’t the slightest glint of regret gleaming in your eyes Yet, I must praise you, my astral love For you, it was so easy to forget to give us another try

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/14/2017 8:40:00 AM
YET ANOTHER GEM FROM YOUR MAJESTIC PEN MY FRIEND.. A FAV...
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Date: 10/13/2017 9:48:00 AM
Ty, everyone for your kind and insightful comments. I've seen in my lifetime many breakups ... and I've observed that some people move on w/no emotional baggage attached. You become yesterday's news in a New York minute to them. Whereas, romantic birds like myself become emotional wrecks. Holding on to a lost loving memory that the other person has quickly let go of. Just some poetic musings of a Romantic Warrior. Love and many more blessings of love always.
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Date: 10/13/2017 6:23:00 AM
you know what ...im speechless i think this is what i call a real LOVE poem IM IN LOVE WITH THE POEM
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Date: 10/13/2017 4:18:00 AM
Such a sad piece, dear. Who can understand the whys...sometimes it isn't something specific...just a slow growing apart. Well written. Hugs
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Date: 10/13/2017 2:09:00 AM
This says it all, doesn't it? "Our love was steamy mist on the bathroom mirror, // and you took a dry toweled tear and wiped it away" This is a great write my friend...
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Date: 10/12/2017 8:43:00 PM
I see this as a one sided love. Yes it hurts when only one person loves and the other does not. Been there many times myself at one time. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/12/2017 8:17:00 PM
Sad awesome emotive write Freddie; like S/O says sometimes love doesn't make any sense~P & L~Che :)
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Date: 10/12/2017 5:07:00 PM
Freddie, a soul searching and intimate write about a love lost. Beautifully written and so relatable. Fantastic poetic expression and flow. Genuinely emotional poetry. Enjoyed!
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Date: 10/12/2017 4:25:00 PM
Always sad when a beloved departs and we are wondering why... Sometimes love does not make sense... A deep emotive write my friend..
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Date: 10/12/2017 11:53:00 AM
A true tale be your penning fictional or not. Hugs and love your way Freddie xomo!
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