So Close

I’m closer to fine than you’ll ever see,
and closer to fine than I’ll ever be.
The sky, earth, and sea – but surely not me,
this then is dimensional harmony.

The birds and creatures in the forest wild
are voices of nature, gentle and mild.
Not I, however, I am a mere child
and in unnatural state, I’m exiled.

In the waters where currents run deep,
there are fish that never consent to sleep.
They swim, dive, or across the reef they creep,
but at the last, they’re in the ocean’s keep.

Could all the planets burst out of align
and the moon and stars forget how to shine?
Would you then believe that truths to assign
are yours, but may lead to doubtful design?

Will you admit that in the world’s decline,
you cannot determine your fate or mine?
A clear hint that you’re now closer to fine,
and clearer still that you’re closer than I’m.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/26/2023 6:36:00 PM
Profound penning, Linda. Terrific!! :) gw
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/26/2023 7:10:00 PM
I'm warmed and encouraged by your comments Gershon. Thank you! :)
Date: 2/23/2023 7:11:00 PM
I really enjoyed this! :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/23/2023 7:39:00 PM
Thank you Aysha. I'm always honored when someone enjoys one of my poems. :)
Date: 2/23/2023 9:20:00 AM
BeUtiful verses, Linda. I saw nothing negative in your poem. Panagiota
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/23/2023 9:48:00 AM
Hello my friend. I always appreciate your supportive and encouraging words. I hope your day is going well!:)
Date: 2/22/2023 7:27:00 AM
The world has to end someday. Great poem, with plenty of imagery.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/22/2023 1:39:00 PM
I really appreciate your supportive comments dear Victor. hugs! :)
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