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So Beautiful You

Wild animals poetry is of our making
sweet scenting beautiful
it becomes the mindset
ingrowing from dreams

Freefalling insight
dazzling beholding
eyes take in the treasure
shining in the soul

In nature made humanly possible
free in flight as a bird
wild yet so beautiful

Watching in silent motion
sweeping across the sky
falling spellbound in the twinkling
of a star blazing 

In nature it occurred to me
touched inner emotions
when the moon smiled it lit up

Your smile said it all
beaming happiness
I fell in love
so beautiful with you

Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2013

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Kelly Deschler Date: 8/29/2013 5:20:00 PM Very beautiful words in this poem, Liam! Very soulful and heartfelt, and I can tell that you have a true passion for poetry. Nicely done! And, thank you for reading my poem "Lonely Soul", and for the nice comments. I really appreciate it! Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 8/29/2013 6:59:00 PM THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT APPRECIATED

Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/29/2013 2:51:00 PM 'I fell in love so beautiful with you'..So romantic this verse within verses of wild and bright! Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 8/29/2013 3:28:00 PM thank you sweetly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/29/2013 1:17:00 PM Good poetry Liam. Your images are very beautiful to read and reread. Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 8/29/2013 1:49:00 PM THANK YOU MY DEAR FRIEND ALWAYS A PLEASURE TO HEAR FROM YOU THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE WONDERFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT APPRECIATED

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2013 12:14:00 PM - Lovely written Liam, pleasure to read your new poem today. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 8/29/2013 2:48:00 PM ANNE LISE THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED