Snowy Winter Days -Trine

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(Trine) In winter there's a lot of snow In many places is falling I know It is so cold right now outside And snow continues to gather aside Most folks have difficulty getting everywhere There's too much snow,more than most foks can bear Snow is falling steadily hard and slow It is only growing very high and wide Folks want snow to stop,for it, they don't care. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,26,2014

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Gary Bateman

Date: 11/26/2014 1:55:00 PM

Love this one "D" (and, of course, the posted picture too!!). This is simply a most wonderful write. The images of winter, cold, snow are employed most effectively here. A Big "7" to you my dear on this write!! All the Best, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/27/2014 12:49:00 PM

Hi Gary my dear friend! Thank you so much for dropping by and kind comments. Wish you a very Happy Thanksgiving Day! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

James Fraser

Date: 11/26/2014 12:42:00 PM

Love the snow Dorian, especially on Christmas Day. May the flakes of success fall on your words, James :) xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/26/2014 2:26:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend James, for your very kind comments! Much appreciated! Have a great evening! :) love and hugs! xxxxx D.

Perry Mcdaid

Date: 11/26/2014 11:01:00 AM

A nice straightforward composition reflecting the feelings of many. Snow is a joy to watch but its charm fades in the absence of sleighs.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/26/2014 2:28:00 PM

Hi Perry! Thank you so much my dear friend for dropping by and kind comments. Much appreciated! :) have a nice day! love and hugs! xxxx D.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/26/2014 9:31:00 AM

I don't care much for the cold myself, but the beauty of fresh fallen snow has always appeased my eyes.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/26/2014 9:44:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Brenda! Have a great day! :) xxxxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2014 4:09:00 AM

absolutely charming Dorian its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/26/2014 9:40:00 AM

Thank you very much Jan! Very much appreciated. :) xxxxx D.