Snowy Winter

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squeezing freezing wheezing breezing squeezing against each other in freezing temps wheezing deep to catch air while breezing Written: February 19, 2022

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/24/2022 8:35:00 PM

Delightful! I can feel the cold through your expressive Tyburn. Best wishes, Brian

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/24/2022 3:26:00 PM

I had forgotten how much I loved a great hybun until I read this, and then I immediately remembered.

Valsa George

Date: 2/20/2022 6:17:00 PM

The intensity of winter is so deeply felt through the choice of apt words ! But your heart is ever warm dear friend !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/20/2022 5:48:00 AM

Feels so cold just reading your poem my friend. You conveyed the freeze beautifully.

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/19/2022 7:43:00 PM

Enjoyed! stay warm. Blessings ~ Debra