Snowy Windy Night Over The Terrace


Tonight, her footsteps crack and moan — 
She's useless when her tears frost over, 
The gutter running without her, alone

There's another ghost inside porchlight silver,
A foot melting on the banister — 
She's dark as the wind that picks her up,

This twisting whirl of white clumps
Against wind now seeming touchable — 
Outside, the snow jumps

With the draft...and then the window's wail,
Being broken apart like snowflakes assails,  
She touches the real parts in foggy glass — 

The cold that blasts through a girl's face,
Years after, the woman outside this table —
So the terrace is her cup, white laughter, dark tastes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Gifford Avatar
February 18, 2026 at 5:17 AM
Hello Paige, an excellent write, I could feel the coldness in my bones as I read it. Wonderful imagery. A fav from me.
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2026 at 10:51 PM
Love all those images of silver, snow and icy white!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2026 at 9:07 PM
The poem picks up in momentum…can feel the heightened emotion. ...The draft...and then the window's wail, Being broken apart like snowflakes assails, She spreads herself of glass — The cold that blasts through a girl's face
Buhagiar Avatar
February 14, 2026 at 3:24 AM
Incredible use of imagery, dear Paige. I notice that you're writing great poems these days.
George Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 11:41 PM
Great imagery, stunning and impressive. Dear Paige, your poem is taking wider dimensions.
Kauffman Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 11:27 AM
Amazing images, Paige, that transport me to a cold and windy winter night outside and in the soul. Blessings. Happy Valentine's day.
Anaya Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 6:10 AM
Down to freeze my very soul. Makes me happy, makes me cold, may the winter sun, warm yours! Impervious xXHugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 3:31 PM
your ability to craft imagery is impressive. I especially liked the last line. :-) Faving
Rodgers Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 4:34 PM
Dear Paige, Oh my it moves like a storm seen from inside the body, the cold, the glass, the wind all turning into a kind of emotional weather. What a haunting, intimate work. Winter Blessings, Paige, Daniel
Daniels Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 1:25 AM
Excellent write, PH. Lovely dark-light images. You seem to be writing quite a bit about glass & windows lately. I trust this means things are becoming more transparent. Love the second stanza & inclusion of silver as colour too. I feel your cold up north. Winter not my favourite. So nice & warm down here now. Xx.
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 10:34 PM
So many terrific images in your wintery poem, Paige love that last verse
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