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Snowy Stream

Amongst barren winter trees Snow caps on a rippled stream Conifers sway in the breeze Images resonate winter dreams True poetry form: Lind30 Newly created by Robert Lindley 7/7/7/9

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/2/2022 7:42:00 AM

Sounds like a lovely winter dream..Delice

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/2/2022 8:54:00 AM

The sight is perfection~wish I could have posted a photo with it. Thanks for your continued support! :)Paulette

John Lawless

Date: 1/28/2022 5:39:00 PM

very nicely done Paulette...love the "snowcaps on a rippled stream"....

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/2/2022 8:55:00 AM

Thank you John~glad you traveled down the stream with me, those snow caps do look delightful! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Anil Deo

Date: 1/27/2022 6:53:00 PM

Few words. Both barren and beautiful ( winter) captured! Kudos, shalom shalom Paulette

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/28/2022 8:35:00 AM

Ah, I love to paint with words! Thanks for commenting! Blessings, Paulette

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/26/2022 1:22:00 PM

This is perfect Paulette. I love it :)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/26/2022 2:56:00 PM

Glad you "love" it Heidi~thanks for stopping by! :) Paulette

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2022 3:55:00 AM

Wonderful Paulette! A perfect example of Robert’s new form. A winter delight! Blessings xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/26/2022 10:12:00 AM

Thank you Connie~I really enjoy working with Robert's new form~I like short forms and this gives a bit more room than a Haiku. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/25/2022 1:46:00 PM

Well said; for sure, all is asleep, dreaming of blossoming. Sort of like our democracy -- hopefully not to perish before an awakened thaw. Joe.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/26/2022 10:15:00 AM

Hi Joe, thanks for stopping by once again. I think all will be well, the flora, the trees and the firs are at rest, everyone needs a little sleep~LOL! Blessings, Paulette

Valsa George

Date: 1/24/2022 8:26:00 PM

The conifer trees, the rippling stream and the wind together create a beautiful scene awakening winter dreams !

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/26/2022 10:16:00 AM

Yes Valsa~the winter landscape is so delightful even though I dis like the cold; I love the magically scenery. :) Paulette

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/24/2022 6:54:00 PM

Very pretty poem, Paulette. Great! ~ gw

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/26/2022 10:17:00 AM

Hi Gershon, thank you~glad you enjoyed it. :) Paulette

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/24/2022 1:55:00 PM

Paulette, you've made excellent use of Lind 30 form. I enjoyed the scenery you portrayed, that is nice, but I'm not a big fan of cold winters in general. Reading this was so interesting.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/24/2022 5:58:00 PM

Lasaad, i really enjoy the Lind30 form it allows for a short poem to expand a little beyond the parameters of a Haiku. I don't particularly like the cold, but I love the winter landscape and the magic it brings. Glad you enjoyed the view! Blessings,Paulette

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/24/2022 1:41:00 AM

Short and very sweet. Loved it. Blessings.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/24/2022 11:01:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it.....I was inspired by a beautiful photograph, unfortunately I was not able to post it with my poem :) Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/23/2022 6:03:00 PM

Winter is the best season, for dreaming and daydreaming, and writing awesome poetry, such as this, Thankyou Paulette, for sparkling my computer tonight, Shine on !

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/24/2022 11:02:00 AM

Glad I could add some "sparkle" to your computer~hope it brought you sweet dreams. :) Paulette

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/23/2022 5:41:00 PM

Nice use of Robert's form, Paulette. I loved the scene you painted, which is saying something for me, because I'm not a cold weather, winter person. Enjoyable reading.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/24/2022 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Milton~Glad I was able to bring this winter scene to you. I find Robert's form very liberating, a short form like the Haiku, but the added syllable count allow for a more expressive canvas. :)Paulette