Paulette Calasibetta Poet Verse

Snowy Stream

Amongst barren winter trees
                                   Snow caps on a rippled stream
                                   Conifers sway in the breeze
                                   Images resonate winter dreams







    True poetry form: Lind30
    Newly created by Robert Lindley
    7/7/7/9

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Delice Arleen Skelly February 2, 2022 at 7:42 AM Sounds like a lovely winter dream..Delice Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2022 at 8:54 AM The sight is perfection~wish I could have posted a photo with it. Thanks for your continued support! :)Paulette

John Lawless January 28, 2022 at 5:39 PM very nicely done Paulette...love the "snowcaps on a rippled stream".... Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2022 at 8:55 AM Thank you John~glad you traveled down the stream with me, those snow caps do look delightful! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Anil Deo January 27, 2022 at 6:53 PM Few words. Both barren and beautiful ( winter) captured! Kudos, shalom shalom Paulette Paulette Calasibetta January 28, 2022 at 8:35 AM Ah, I love to paint with words! Thanks for commenting! Blessings, Paulette

Heidi Sands January 26, 2022 at 1:22 PM This is perfect Paulette. I love it :) Paulette Calasibetta January 26, 2022 at 2:56 PM Glad you "love" it Heidi~thanks for stopping by! :) Paulette

Connie Marcum Wong January 26, 2022 at 3:55 AM Wonderful Paulette! A perfect example of Robert’s new form. A winter delight! Blessings xxoo Paulette Calasibetta January 26, 2022 at 10:12 AM Thank you Connie~I really enjoy working with Robert's new form~I like short forms and this gives a bit more room than a Haiku. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette

Joseph P. DiMino January 25, 2022 at 1:46 PM Well said; for sure, all is asleep, dreaming of blossoming. Sort of like our democracy -- hopefully not to perish before an awakened thaw. Joe. Paulette Calasibetta January 26, 2022 at 10:15 AM Hi Joe, thanks for stopping by once again. I think all will be well, the flora, the trees and the firs are at rest, everyone needs a little sleep~LOL! Blessings, Paulette

Valsa George January 24, 2022 at 8:26 PM The conifer trees, the rippling stream and the wind together create a beautiful scene awakening winter dreams ! Paulette Calasibetta January 26, 2022 at 10:16 AM Yes Valsa~the winter landscape is so delightful even though I dis like the cold; I love the magically scenery. :) Paulette

Gershon Wolf January 24, 2022 at 6:54 PM Very pretty poem, Paulette. Great! ~ gw Paulette Calasibetta January 26, 2022 at 10:17 AM Hi Gershon, thank you~glad you enjoyed it. :) Paulette

Sotto Poet January 24, 2022 at 1:55 PM Paulette, you've made excellent use of Lind 30 form. I enjoyed the scenery you portrayed, that is nice, but I'm not a big fan of cold winters in general. Reading this was so interesting. Paulette Calasibetta January 24, 2022 at 5:58 PM Lasaad, i really enjoy the Lind30 form it allows for a short poem to expand a little beyond the parameters of a Haiku. I don't particularly like the cold, but I love the winter landscape and the magic it brings. Glad you enjoyed the view! Blessings,Paulette

Victor Buhagiar January 24, 2022 at 1:41 AM Short and very sweet. Loved it. Blessings. Paulette Calasibetta January 24, 2022 at 11:01 AM Glad you enjoyed it.....I was inspired by a beautiful photograph, unfortunately I was not able to post it with my poem :) Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose January 23, 2022 at 6:03 PM Winter is the best season, for dreaming and daydreaming, and writing awesome poetry, such as this, Thankyou Paulette, for sparkling my computer tonight, Shine on ! Paulette Calasibetta January 24, 2022 at 11:02 AM Glad I could add some "sparkle" to your computer~hope it brought you sweet dreams. :) Paulette

L Milton Hankins January 23, 2022 at 5:41 PM Nice use of Robert's form, Paulette. I loved the scene you painted, which is saying something for me, because I'm not a cold weather, winter person. Enjoyable reading. Paulette Calasibetta January 24, 2022 at 11:08 AM Thanks Milton~Glad I was able to bring this winter scene to you. I find Robert's form very liberating, a short form like the Haiku, but the added syllable count allow for a more expressive canvas. :)Paulette