Snowy Rows

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"They say love beyond the world cannot be separated by it. Death cannot kill what never dies. Quote by -William Penn

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the winding road is cold my darling there are footprints here and there in the new fallen white- your flowers have blown away among the snowy rows my darling ______________________ January 24, 2022 Poetry/Imagism/snowy rows Copyright Protected, ID 01-142-158-24 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La Frane Written for the Standard contest, A Strand (1059) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/26/2022 First Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2022 10:39:00 AM

Looking at your poems that use imagism, Constance. This one is so sweet.

Constance La France
Date: 3/6/2022 3:24:00 PM

Andrea, thank you for coming to this older poem, and for the compliment ~Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/26/2022 10:09:00 PM

Great imagery and beautiful telling. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2022 8:04:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~

John Lawless

Date: 1/24/2022 4:29:00 PM

magnificent imagery Constance exposing the subtle sweet bitterness of loneliness.

Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2022 7:55:00 AM

John, thank you so much for the compliment ~

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/24/2022 1:37:00 PM

How poignant! A beautiful tribute to a love that has passed....heartbreaking but beautiful! Good luck in the contest~this would be my pick for #1. Blessings, Paulette

Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2022 7:56:00 AM

Paulette, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, blessings ~