Snowy Outside

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Animal Themes, Animal, Bird, Flying, Animal Wildlife

Outside my world is colored white, The snow meets a pale, pale, pale sky' And in the trees birds sing so bright, Outside _ my world is colored ... white, Now a gang of sparrows take flight ~~ Oh, how do they survive? I sigh. Outside my world is colored _ white, The snow meets a pale, pale, pale sky ! ___________________ January 23, 2022 Poetry/Triolet/Snowy Outside Copyright Protected, ID 01-1423-878-23 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Triolet sponsor, Caren Krutsinger, Judged 03/08/2022

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/23/2022 1:10:00 PM

So lovely, Constance. As much as I hate wintertime, the scenes are often startlingly eye-catching, especially from inside my warm house. You have such a gift for seeing beauty in your surroundings, even though sometimes through sadness. Best wishes in Caren's contest.

Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2022 4:01:00 AM

Milt, thanks for the compliment and comment, appreciate so much ~