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Snowy December

SNOWY DECEMBER

hearth fire pops    crackles
a pattering on the roof
the gadzillion stars

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2011 12:09:00 PM

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Daver. Love and blessings, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/12/2011 5:22:00 AM

When it's a clear sky those gadzillion stars are the most beautiful site of all. A wonderful write, Daver. Have a great week. Gwendolen

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/11/2011 6:16:00 AM

talk about imagery. Three loaded lines Daver. Made me halt my quest, whatever that was, and muse a bit on this one. Good to be reading your goods again. Been a while. Your friend Bob

Nola Perez

Date: 12/10/2011 3:48:00 PM

Daver! Where, and How are you? We sort of lost contact, of which I am acutely aware. Have a Merry, Merry, and hopefully it will be a better year 2012 for us all.

James Peranteau

Date: 12/7/2011 1:35:00 PM

What a beautiful picture dear poet ! And a wonderful Haiku ! Have a wonderful week Dave....much love, james

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2011 12:34:00 AM

Daver, we are dying here in Texas (LOL) its been cold 3 days straight... It's been 65 degrees, lol.. and we are crying like babies... can you imagine what snow would do to us... But, that open roof does not sound good either... enjoyed,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2011 10:32:00 PM

wow, this is super cool, DAver, and I appreciated your comments on Dreamer. Just dreamin' away!

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/6/2011 11:41:00 AM

* "JUST HAPPILY STOPPING BACK BY TO SAY THANK YOU * MY DEAR SWEET PRECIOUS DAVER * FOR YOUR PRICELESS HEARTS LOVELY VISIT * MADE MY HEART SMILE * STAY BEAUTIFUL * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Jack Horne

Date: 12/6/2011 11:12:00 AM

Lovely piece, Daver

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/6/2011 11:00:00 AM

* "DEFINITELY A WONDERFULLY COMPOSED AMID CONCISES FITTING FOR A WINTER S EVE * MY DEAR SWEET PRECIOUS DAVER * THE ONLY THING MISSING UNTO MYSELF WOULD BE SOME SOFT MUSIC * A BOTTLE OF WINE & MY HEARTS BEAUTIFUL LOVE * LOVE THIS IMAGE VERY MUCH * HAPPY HOLIDAYS DEAR ONE * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 12/6/2011 10:21:00 AM

Great Haiku, sir. Really enjoyed this one.