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I saw the cutest snowman with his happy icy heart perfectly fat and tipping his hat with one candles light to impart No question his hat was of magic and the fur of his trimmed coat was fine but the smile he wore you can’t help but adore and the art of the moment refined Kinkade was always a favorite being known as the painter of light so the art on his coat and the scarf round his throat were truly a beautiful sight Then I saw it was a series and plays 8 different Christmas songs I thought this is the one where I’d say I’d begun to really let go of the wrongs For me he’ll be hopes for the future instead of warm memories of old my memories of that have deflated to flat most are just frigid and cold But just like this icy snowman adorned in his beautiful art I think that it’s time for this cold heart of mine to make a more meaningful start I feel just like this snowman to say as much is true so I’m going to start to wear my art and proudly show it to you I’ll still be cold and frigid since I’m only made of snow but my art is the part of my icy cold heart that sometimes makes me glow

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Date: 12/20/2021 6:56:00 PM
A fine glowing creation my friend. Everytime I think of Christmas, my first thought looks bck to my childhood when we prayed fior snow! We would brave the cold , to go outside and play, snowball fights, etc. Days long gone now, well over 50 years ago. A fav.. God bless..
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:12:00 PM
First visit Jeanie, I liked your fun-to-read Snowman poem. Write On! Bill
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/14/2021 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Bill, I appreciate the visit and the comment. Happy Holidays
Date: 12/12/2021 5:29:00 PM
Very nice blend of fire and ice! And my physical therapist recommend that I do the same with my aching back. Alternate hot and cold. lol. Season's best, Gershon
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/12/2021 7:04:00 PM
Wise advice ~ Happy Holidays
Date: 12/12/2021 4:58:00 PM
This is lovely Jeannie. Perfect rhyme and rhythm along with a wonderful message. Loved it through and through. A fave for me. God Bless and Merry Christmas to your and yours. JB
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/12/2021 7:05:00 PM
Thank You, Judy and a very Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Date: 12/10/2021 10:58:00 AM
Such a lovely piece Jeannie, great rhyme and flow along with lovely imagery. It's great to read your pen again, really missed your pen for so long, Trust life is good with you. Blessings always,Gordon
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/10/2021 1:13:00 PM
Hi Gordon, great to hear from you. I am doing well and hope the same for you. I saw this ad in a magazine and the words just came out, must been in one of my “Hallmark” moods. Have a wonderful holiday season ~Jeannie
Date: 12/9/2021 10:34:00 AM
Wonderful write... love it. Your rhymes are sublime :) Beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/9/2021 10:57:00 AM
Thanks Regina. I appreciate the comment.
Date: 12/7/2021 3:21:00 PM
Hi Jeannie, I love your poem, nicely written. I'm a big fan of Thomas Kinkade. Season Greetings ~ Debra
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/7/2021 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Debra, Happy Holidays to you.

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