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Snowflakes, Smiles and Tears

White lace and snowflakes on our wedding day
A blizzard raging outside
Warmth abounds in the church
 
In spite of the weather all guests arrived
To watch as we exchanged rings
Most smiled, but mama cried



 
*Written for Dr. Ram’s contest: "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage"

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2011 9:42:00 PM Yours was one of the most beautiful, carolyn.Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/4/2011 6:10:00 AM Congratulations on your win Carolyn in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/4/2011 6:10:00 AM Congratulations on your win Carolyn in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/4/2011 2:48:00 AM you nailed it again, my carols.. best cheers for a high winning spot in the contest with all my huggs!:) Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/3/2011 7:17:00 PM What a beautiful snapshot of a wedding-- snowy outside but warm inside, loved that-- Congrats on your win Carolyn :) hugs Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/3/2011 4:25:00 PM A good looking verse up there in the top four Carolyn. Congratulations on your worthy poem's fourth place honor. Quite true, a touching verse lady. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Nicole Hawkins Date: 4/3/2011 4:15:00 PM I knew this one would win! Lovely -Nicole Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/3/2011 3:12:00 PM ongratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Carolyn Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/1/2011 12:24:00 PM enjoyed reading this a very good one. thank you for reading my poety and for your comments. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 3/25/2011 10:21:00 AM Warm feeling do shout from this write.. a nice and strong entry for Dr. Ram's contest... your comments uplift me and my poetry...with love Michael Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/24/2011 6:04:00 PM Good luck in the contest, looks like a goo one. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/23/2011 10:24:00 AM Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments and concern Carolyn. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 3/23/2011 9:09:00 AM A lovely poem, Carolyn! "White lace and snowflakes", pureness and charm. The warmth and love circulating in the church would make it a most memorable day!Best to you and yours, Mikki Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 3/23/2011 6:49:00 AM Oh yes Carolyn, this is a great poem ! And a great entry ! Who'd ever think that; "snowflakes, smiles, and tears" would ever make sense ! Great write dear poet ! Have a special day dear Carolyn ! Much love (2u), james Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/23/2011 5:53:00 AM I have enjoyed reading your amazingly beautiful poetry this morning Carolyn. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/22/2011 10:59:00 PM this is just "precious" CArolyn! It should do very well in the contest. Wish I could have had such a topic as this to describe, but I went for the pondering approach! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/22/2011 10:28:00 PM An outstanding write laced with coldness,warmth,joy and sorrow-kashinath Login to Reply

David Byrne Date: 3/22/2011 9:49:00 PM Wonderful and pragmatic! Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 3/22/2011 6:53:00 PM at least your mama cried, mine drank and shook her head ( at least at my first wedding),,, great entry , best of luck in the contest Carolyn Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 3/22/2011 5:04:00 PM Oh LNC..sweet write..wish I had been there..love...BG Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/22/2011 3:24:00 PM Enjoyed reading your work..So romantic and real...I can feel the mother's pain..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner....Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..Sara Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 3/22/2011 3:20:00 PM If you ever cross the pond, we'll have fish 'n' chips on the Barbican together - and you can shock Sue with your salt intake (so she doesn't notice mine...). I've read this poem again and still get a lovely warm feeling from it. Great work : ) Jack Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/22/2011 12:23:00 PM Smashing entry for Dr. Ram's contest Carolyn, good luck with this lovely poem....:) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/22/2011 12:15:00 PM Thanks for the entry, Carolyn Login to Reply

George Aul Date: 3/22/2011 10:56:00 AM Good luck in the contest.....good write.......... thanks for the comments.........George Login to Reply

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