Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Snowflakes On Eyelashes

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Crisp evening breezes
neath gray flannel skies
Stardust reflections
in baby blue eyes
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Snowflakes on eyelashes
icicle drips
Flurrying kisses
‘pon enchanting lips
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Moonbeams enticing
a beautiful smile
Down feather whispers
melodic in style
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Holding you close
below heavens above
This winter evening 
just falling in love
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Lady Labyrinth January 14, 2020 at 10:26 AM Magic. x Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 10:40 AM Thanks!

Connie Marcum Wong January 12, 2020 at 2:34 PM I thought of the same thing as Gershon when reading this lovely lyrical piece Chris. Romance blooms with winter dreams. Love it! : ) xxoo Chris Green January 13, 2020 at 8:58 AM Thanks Connie. Once he told me that it is all I can think of when I read this title. : )

Heidi Sands January 11, 2020 at 2:08 PM This is a beautiful winter evening, so comforting , so nice Chris :) Chris Green January 13, 2020 at 8:57 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

Gershon Wolf January 9, 2020 at 5:19 PM Another great poem... but no ho-humming here! -- Try singing this poem to the melody of 'My Favorite Things' from 'The Sound of Music' (Julie Andrews sang it). Fits like a glove! Wow. All you need, just add a refrain, and you will be a certified lyricist! Congrats! Cheers, Gershon Gershon Wolf January 9, 2020 at 6:14 PM Me-ow! Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 5:27 PM And I was going to write "whiskers on kittens" : ) Thanks my friend, your comments are always a few of my favorite things.

Pashang Salehi January 9, 2020 at 2:29 PM It's fascinating to think about how each snowflake is completely individual ... there are millions and millions of them, but each one is so unique and perfect, as your poem. Pashang Salehi January 21, 2020 at 1:51 AM Like us, humans... Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 2:41 PM Thank you so very much for that wonderful compliment. I appreciate your visit and your kindness. And I am with you, it is amazing to think that no two are alike and the numbers are so vast

Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2020 at 2:04 PM - A sweet and lovely poem, Chris - Thanks for the warm words on my last poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 2:40 PM Thank you my friend and I am so sorry. Keep smiling Anne-Lise and know we are all keeping you in our hearts.

Carolyn Devonshire January 9, 2020 at 12:59 PM What a romantic mood you set in a winter wonderland of scenery surpassed by your lover's beauty. You make me miss being in love, Chris. Stunning! Hugs, Carolyn Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 1:34 PM Thank you so much Carolyn for your beautiful comment. Being in love is wonderful, I hope it find you again my friend.

Lin Lane January 9, 2020 at 8:28 AM Gray flannel skies is a fantastic line to foreshadow the weather terms you used...snowflakes and icicles. Oh... but then you warmed the scene with a flurry of kisses. I hope they were as soft and gentle as flakes of snow; at first. Very engaging lines, Chris. Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 9:43 AM Thank you so very much my beautiful poetic friend. I appreciate your kindness and am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Caren Krutsinger January 9, 2020 at 5:22 AM "just falling in love" sounds like anything but JUST in this poem, Chris! Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 7:07 AM Thanks so much Caren. I think you are right.

John Hamilton January 8, 2020 at 9:15 PM Few if anyone here write as you do Chris, I don't know how you can keep them coming, so quickly and of top quality. Another gem, thanks for sharing! Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 7:07 AM Thanks so much John. I appreciate your kindness my friend but this one felt forced to me because it was but I am happy you liked it.

Sandra Adams January 8, 2020 at 6:19 PM wow...sigh...your muse sings so beautifully my friend...i will never look at the cloudy evening skies the same way again... this is gorgeous... goodnight Chris, may your evening be as enchanting as your words... hugs Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 7:06 AM Thank you my friend. I am so happy you enjoyed this, it was inspired by some beautiful thoughts that were shared with me about the moon last night.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 8, 2020 at 5:43 PM Hello Chris, I like the way the words flow in this poem. Wow! Have a nice evening my friend. Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 7:05 AM Thank you so very much Darlene