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Snowflakes In Spirit

Snowflakes and palm trees unlikely to meet And yet they embellish my beautiful street Okay, so they’re lighted of plastic design Their message still carries a message divine That joy and that peace can incense the air And even when different climates compare Snowflakes in spirit can always survive Especially when needed to keep love alive

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/19/2023 5:56:00 AM

Snowflakes are a wonder and are wondrous to watch. I have always wanted to walk with snowflakes dropping on my face, but having lived my entire, almost, live in a hot climate, can only imagine how love and romance would blossom in such a scenario. Wonderful write Mike, Happy Christmas to you and yours, my friend, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/19/2023 6:49:00 AM

Thank you so much Jennifer and Happy Christmas to you xxoo

Deb M

Date: 12/16/2023 3:50:00 PM

Hey Mike…..this poem made me feel really nice…simple and light! Lovely….Debx

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/17/2023 6:24:00 AM

Thank you Deb!

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/15/2023 3:56:00 PM

This is fun and the lines dance :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/16/2023 5:53:00 AM

Thank you Heidi xxoo

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/15/2023 3:35:00 PM

I enjoyed the rhythm and flow of your poem. Opposites can get along or, at the very least, co-exist meaningfully. I love the metaphor snowflakes and palm trees. Well done. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Mike Gentile
Date: 12/16/2023 5:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara xxoo