Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Snowflakes

Dancing with the moonlight
there's a glisten to the air
fluffy flakes of goodness 
filter here and there

a soft and peaceful feeling 
your hand touches mine
captured by the beauty, 
two souls just lost in time

There's roses in the window
I'll choose a few for you
so pure and fresh as daybreak
and a pleasure floating through

My gaze is with the star shine
glints of wonder cast your eye
I tilt your head, then kiss you
releasing feelings trapped inside

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John Fleming February 6, 2018 at 8:45 AM Rather a warming little poem, Tim...it is actually snowing right now at this moment. Well done on your POTD! My very best regards. :) john

Eric Boddie January 17, 2018 at 2:50 PM tim, the Love you do show....i am sure she will never truly know....from your heart to your pen is how your words flow....with seeds of Love being all they sow....and from that only Beauty can grow....the only protection from all things negative and low....tim, my friend, you are indeed a gem to this site.... Tim Smith January 17, 2018 at 6:06 PM Thanks Eric, good to see you

Susan Ashley January 16, 2018 at 10:11 PM Returning with congratulations Tim on your well deserved POTD honors for your tender and romantic write.. ~Susan Tim Smith January 17, 2018 at 6:05 PM Thanks Susan

Anna Hopper January 16, 2018 at 9:00 PM It just doesn’t get more poetic than you, my friend. Lovely! Tim Smith January 17, 2018 at 6:03 PM Thank you Anna my friend

Darlene De Beaulieu January 16, 2018 at 8:27 PM I like this poem, I like how the words flow all together. Have a nice evening my friend. Tim Smith January 17, 2018 at 6:03 PM Thank you Darlene

Jean Murray January 16, 2018 at 5:55 PM I was just thinking as I read how we are having our first real snowfall here today. Then I came upon those last two lines and my heart melted Tim. Tim Smith January 17, 2018 at 6:00 PM Thank you Jean

Connie Marcum Wong January 16, 2018 at 5:23 PM The tender romantic feelings this conjures stills the heart Tim! Breathtaking! Congratulations on having this beauty honored with POTD! : ) Tim Smith January 17, 2018 at 6:00 PM Thanks Connie

Jan Allison January 16, 2018 at 3:58 PM Many congrats Tim such a very worthy POTD award:-) hugs jan xx Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 4:29 PM Thank you Jan

Arthur Vaso January 16, 2018 at 3:26 PM Well deserved, so romantic, congrats Tim!! Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 3:33 PM Thank you Arthur

Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2018 at 2:03 PM - A lovely poem, Tim :) - Congratulate on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 2:35 PM Thank you A-L

Keith O.J. Hunt January 16, 2018 at 1:27 PM Sweet as the finest sugar, congrats on POTD Tim, well deserved;-) Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 2:34 PM thank you Keith

Akkina Downing January 16, 2018 at 12:50 PM Coming back for my third read and to congratulate you on POTD, Tim! Wonderful... hugs and smiles :) Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 2:34 PM Thanks again kina : )

Charlie Smith January 16, 2018 at 12:36 PM Lovely Tim, congratulations my friend... Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 2:33 PM thank you Charlie

Shreastha Vyas January 16, 2018 at 12:09 PM Its wow poem Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 2:31 PM Thanks Shreastha

Eve Roper January 16, 2018 at 11:07 AM You are such a romantic, Tim, the visual has been imprinted with the coolness in the air and the warmness of embrace. I but you are cold right now.. Schools are closed in this part of Texas. Congratulations on POTD .. Hugs Eve ~`* Eve Roper January 16, 2018 at 11:51 PM Weather: 26°F Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:29 AM I hope everyone is safe there. I just got in from shoveling. It's not bad here 20 but no wind and a 6 inch blanket of snow.

Sunlite Wanter January 16, 2018 at 9:41 AM Just a beautiful image, Tim, and so well done as your poems are. Congratulations! Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:27 AM Thank you Sunlite

Joseph May January 16, 2018 at 8:45 AM Beautiful poem Tim...Congrats on POTD Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:26 AM Thanks Joseph

John Lawless January 16, 2018 at 7:55 AM Simply beautiful Tim. Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:26 AM Thanks John

James Swartz January 16, 2018 at 7:45 AM Beautiful words Tim. You gave us a wonderful poem. Congratulations on POTD! Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:24 AM Thanks James

Arturo Michael January 16, 2018 at 7:39 AM A lovely poem Tim... Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:21 AM Thanks Arturo

Beautiful Scars January 16, 2018 at 7:32 AM congrats on this lovely poem ;)-luloo Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:20 AM Thank you Laura

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 16, 2018 at 6:31 AM Back with congrats! Lovely to read you here this morning Tim, lovely ink, a perfect potd :) Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:20 AM thanks dear friend

Lin Lane January 16, 2018 at 4:58 AM Moonlight and roses...you set the stage for a perfect kiss. Well done and happy to see it as potd, Tim. Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:19 AM Thanks so much Lin :)

Ilene Bauer January 15, 2018 at 2:14 PM this is very lovely, tim! Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 11:11 AM thank you ilene

Susan Ashley January 15, 2018 at 1:30 PM Beautifully romantic and tender Tim. Enjoyed.. ~Susan Tim Smith January 16, 2018 at 10:59 AM Thank you Susan

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