Snowflakes

Dancing with the moonlight
there's a glisten to the air
fluffy flakes of goodness 
filter here and there

a soft and peaceful feeling 
your hand touches mine
captured by the beauty, 
two souls just lost in time

There's roses in the window
I'll choose a few for you
so pure and fresh as daybreak
and a pleasure floating through

My gaze is with the star shine
glints of wonder cast your eye
I tilt your head, then kiss you
releasing feelings trapped inside

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John Fleming

Date: 2/6/2018 8:45:00 AM

Rather a warming little poem, Tim...it is actually snowing right now at this moment. Well done on your POTD! My very best regards. :) john

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/17/2018 2:50:00 PM

tim, the Love you do show....i am sure she will never truly know....from your heart to your pen is how your words flow....with seeds of Love being all they sow....and from that only Beauty can grow....the only protection from all things negative and low....tim, my friend, you are indeed a gem to this site....

Tim Smith
Date: 1/17/2018 6:06:00 PM

Thanks Eric, good to see you

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/16/2018 10:11:00 PM

Returning with congratulations Tim on your well deserved POTD honors for your tender and romantic write.. ~Susan

Tim Smith
Date: 1/17/2018 6:05:00 PM

Thanks Susan

Anna Hopper

Date: 1/16/2018 9:00:00 PM

It just doesn’t get more poetic than you, my friend. Lovely!

Tim Smith
Date: 1/17/2018 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Anna my friend

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/16/2018 8:27:00 PM

I like this poem, I like how the words flow all together. Have a nice evening my friend.

Tim Smith
Date: 1/17/2018 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Darlene

Jean Murray

Date: 1/16/2018 5:55:00 PM

I was just thinking as I read how we are having our first real snowfall here today. Then I came upon those last two lines and my heart melted Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 1/17/2018 6:00:00 PM

Thank you Jean

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2018 5:23:00 PM

The tender romantic feelings this conjures stills the heart Tim! Breathtaking! Congratulations on having this beauty honored with POTD! : )

Tim Smith
Date: 1/17/2018 6:00:00 PM

Thanks Connie

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2018 3:58:00 PM

Many congrats Tim such a very worthy POTD award:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 1/16/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/16/2018 3:26:00 PM

Well deserved, so romantic, congrats Tim!!

Tim Smith
Date: 1/16/2018 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Arthur

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/16/2018 2:03:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Tim :) - Congratulate on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 1/16/2018 2:35:00 PM

Thank you A-L

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 1/16/2018 1:27:00 PM

Sweet as the finest sugar, congrats on POTD Tim, well deserved;-)

Tim Smith
Date: 1/16/2018 2:34:00 PM

thank you Keith

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/16/2018 12:50:00 PM

Coming back for my third read and to congratulate you on POTD, Tim! Wonderful... hugs and smiles :)

Tim Smith
Date: 1/16/2018 2:34:00 PM

Thanks again kina : )

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/16/2018 12:36:00 PM

Lovely Tim, congratulations my friend...

Tim Smith
Date: 1/16/2018 2:33:00 PM

thank you Charlie

Shreastha Vyas

Date: 1/16/2018 12:09:00 PM

Its wow poem

Tim Smith
Date: 1/16/2018 2:31:00 PM

Thanks Shreastha

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2018 11:07:00 AM

You are such a romantic, Tim, the visual has been imprinted with the coolness in the air and the warmness of embrace. I but you are cold right now.. Schools are closed in this part of Texas. Congratulations on POTD .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Eve Roper
Date: 1/16/2018 11:51:00 PM

Weather: 26°F

Tim Smith
Date: 1/16/2018 11:29:00 AM

I hope everyone is safe there. I just got in from shoveling. It's not bad here 20 but no wind and a 6 inch blanket of snow.