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snowflakes gently fall kissing my dark eyelashes Autumn days are gone 12-10-17

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Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 1/16/2018 6:12:00 PM

Hey Jan. Cool haiku. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2018 6:16:00 PM

Thanks so much Val Happy new year to you too:-) hugs jan xx

Jannie Breedt

Date: 1/2/2018 5:37:00 AM

Hi Jan , lovely pic too.Hope the cold doesnt get you the way the heat does down here. Blessings Jannie

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2018 6:16:00 PM

Hi Jannie today we have had bitterly cold weather and high winds - just a brief flurry of snow today, i love warm not hot weather lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/15/2017 5:20:00 PM

Being kissed by snowflakes sounds enchanting, Jan, but apart from that I don't envy the cold of your winters!! Here we've had three lovely days in succession; in fact I had some plumbing to do in the back yard and I was comfortable in short sleeves. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2017 5:25:00 PM

We have had freezing temperatures gale force winds, sleet hail and snow and shock horror I've had to dig out my thermal vest lol:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/13/2017 9:17:00 AM

This is a great haiku I enjoyed reading. Have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2017 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot

Date: 12/13/2017 5:34:00 AM

Inspirational you'll see! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2017 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Mick:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/12/2017 3:53:00 PM

Pretty haiku - and you stuck to the 5 7 5 formula which is all to the good! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2017 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Matthew I do like writing in the traditional form:-) hugs Jan xx

Ghita Manaila

Date: 12/11/2017 10:10:00 AM

Brilliant haiku, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thanks Ghita:-) hugs Jan xx

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/11/2017 9:53:00 AM

Indeed... lovely

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/19/2017 1:36:00 PM

You too....

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thanks Pashang I hope you have a wonderful time over the festive period-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2017 7:48:00 PM

I agree with Ilene. Very lovely, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2017 4:34:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/10/2017 5:17:00 PM

very lovely, jan! yes, winter has made an appearance for sure...

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 5:19:00 PM

We are lucky the snow didn't settle but it did cause chaos on Friday and all the schools were closed and transport was disrupted:-( hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 12/10/2017 4:18:00 PM

Nicely done, Jan. // Barry

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Barry:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/10/2017 12:57:00 PM

- Snow here too, Jan - Beautiful haiku :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) just keep warm and safe:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/10/2017 11:40:00 AM

Beautiful....haiku isn't easy to do...but you have done so with class. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 11:57:00 AM

thanks so much Eileen i am never really sure if I've written a proper haiku or not:-) I woke with this one in my head, we've had snowy conditions since Friday but it didn't stay where I am but some other areas are still covered:-) hugs jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/10/2017 9:31:00 AM

Snowflakes!How wonderful. Welcome winter.Love Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 9:42:00 AM

It is bitterly cold Rajat, we don't have snow where we are but other areas of the Island have been badly hit. :-( hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 12/10/2017 8:58:00 AM

They are like diamonds that put the sparkles in your eyes. A perfect gif for your write, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 9:42:00 AM

I don't mind the vision Lin I don't like the reality of the bitter cold lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 12/10/2017 9:23:00 AM

It's a lovely vision to wake up to any morning.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Lin, I woke up with the poem in my head, I guess the snowy weather over the last 2 days inspired it:-) hugs jan xx

John Gondolf

Date: 12/10/2017 8:57:00 AM

Jan, I enjoyed reading this, very nice. John

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 9:06:00 AM

Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/10/2017 8:55:00 AM

Jan, this is a lovely sentiment. Fave!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 8:56:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/10/2017 8:39:00 AM

Beautiful Jan! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2017 8:41:00 AM

Thanks Heidi:-) we still have areas on the Island that are covered in snow, it caused havoc on Friday when all the schools were closed and the buses couldn't run for a while and planes couldn't land as they had run out of de-icer at the airport !:-) hugs jan xx