Snowflakes

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Poetry/Verse/Snowflakes
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1699-566-11
All Rights Resrved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, January 12, 2025
For the International Contest, A 2025 Poem
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/15/2025

Third Place

* * * * as snowflakes fall from tangled tree branches they dance and whirl about me I stop and stand still dazzled in a celestial light it is glorious and I am lost in a dream of walking in a summer breeze gathering flowers of sunlight caressing me and now my dream is fading, fading, away with each falling snowflake cold beautiful as any summer flower found * * *

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 1/16/2025 2:49:00 AM

I like the linking of snow and petals falling and how you can be in the middle of it, not just a distant spectator. It is very pretty. J :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/12/2025 9:01:00 PM

This is a touching tribute to the tiny snowflake. I enjoy the imaginative style.

Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2025 9:15:00 PM

Hilda, thank you for the visit, comment and complimnt ~