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cinquain contest sponsored by Ink Empress

october 15, 2023

Snowflakes

Snowflakes 
Dance in the air 
Crystals of frozen ice
Swirling and tumbling to the ground
Winter

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2023

snowwintercinquain

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2023 8:10:00 AM

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I’m not quite ready for winter but still your poem paints pretty snowflakes on my mind.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/19/2023 7:43:00 PM

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No snow for me in the south. Thank you.

Date: 10/17/2023 10:25:00 AM

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Dear Lin, your Cinquain beautifully captures the essence of winter with its stunning imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/17/2023 2:42:00 PM

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Thank you soooo very much for your sweet remarks, Lasaad.

Date: 10/17/2023 6:12:00 AM

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Dear Lin Lane, Beautiful imagery, i can see through your words, snowflakes swirling and tumbling, to the ground, as crystals of frozen ice. Very well written for a wintry theme. Thank you for sharing this cinquain. Congratulations on winning

Lin Lane
Date: 10/17/2023 8:06:00 AM

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Thanks very much for honoring my entry in your contest with a placement, Ink. I didn’t know you would accept more than one Cinquain or it would’ve been my pleasure to write more for you. I’m looking forward to your next challenge. ;-)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/16/2023 5:35:00 PM

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A wonderful cinquain Lin. God luck in the contest my friend.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/17/2023 8:03:00 AM

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Thanks for your well wishes, Jerry.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/16/2023 11:22:00 AM

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A creative/fun Cinquain write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away......................

Lin Lane
Date: 10/17/2023 8:03:00 AM

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Thanks a lot, Paula.

Date: 10/16/2023 11:04:00 AM

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Nice Cinquian. Snow and ice come soon.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/17/2023 6:49:00 AM

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Thanks, Jay. No snow and ice for me.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/16/2023 9:44:00 AM

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From a to be with splendid observations. Best for a win. Blessings.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/17/2023 6:49:00 AM

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Thank you very much, Victor. Have a great day!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/15/2023 7:11:00 PM

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A very compelling Cinquian. Enough os summer, let's have snow.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/16/2023 11:06:00 AM

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Thank you very much, Hilda. I live in the South, so snow would be wonderful but rare for me.

Date: 10/15/2023 1:06:00 PM

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absolutely delightful, I love the imagery in so few words Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 10/15/2023 6:02:00 PM

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Thanks, Jan. It's been a long day and it's so nice to read so many great comments after getting home

Date: 10/15/2023 12:54:00 PM

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A lovely poem that will do well in the contest. Best wishes Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/15/2023 12:58:00 PM

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Thank you so much, Karen. We shall see

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