Snowflakes

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cinquain contest sponsored by Ink Empress

october 15, 2023

Snowflakes Dance in the air Crystals of frozen ice Swirling and tumbling to the ground Winter

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2023 8:10:00 AM

I’m not quite ready for winter but still your poem paints pretty snowflakes on my mind.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/19/2023 7:43:00 PM

No snow for me in the south. Thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/17/2023 10:25:00 AM

Dear Lin, your Cinquain beautifully captures the essence of winter with its stunning imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/17/2023 2:42:00 PM

Thank you soooo very much for your sweet remarks, Lasaad.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 6:12:00 AM

Dear Lin Lane, Beautiful imagery, i can see through your words, snowflakes swirling and tumbling, to the ground, as crystals of frozen ice. Very well written for a wintry theme. Thank you for sharing this cinquain. Congratulations on winning

Lin Lane
Date: 10/17/2023 8:06:00 AM

Thanks very much for honoring my entry in your contest with a placement, Ink. I didn’t know you would accept more than one Cinquain or it would’ve been my pleasure to write more for you. I’m looking forward to your next challenge. ;-)