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The snowflake is like Man—beautiful, yet fallen. But, in the end, they share the same fate: and die [without a savior].

Like Man—beautiful, yet fallen—snowflake errs, strays, dies. Exists no more.

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Date: 5/10/2018 10:26:00 PM
Insightful message, good Haiku form.Basho would like
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 5/11/2018 7:23:00 PM
Terry, Thank you for your high praise (Basho), indeed! Ngoc. :-)
Date: 5/10/2018 8:45:00 AM
Love ma poems brief and potent. Good stuff Ngoc!
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 5/10/2018 10:16:00 AM
Maureen, Thanks so much! I'm glad you like 'em. Ngoc. :-)

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