Snowfall

snow silently falls icicles hang on branches... squirrel breaks the ice 12-15-2019 Contest: Writing Challenge, December - Winter Haiku or Senryu Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2019 7:21:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 12/26/2019 5:43:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your lovely haiku ~

Joseph May
Date: 12/27/2019 10:05:00 AM

Thank you for my placement DH.

Peter W Iversen

Date: 12/26/2019 10:14:00 AM

Excellent, congrats-Peter

Jan Allison

Date: 12/25/2019 5:41:00 PM

what a beautiful wintery haiku, seasons greetings to you and your loved ones:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2019 2:26:00 PM

- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Joseph :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2019 5:38:00 PM

BAck with my congrats, Joseph. Also to wish you a merry Christmas. I was gonna judge my contest for Xmas eve but I saw one more slot not taken. So it looks like it will be Xmas day unless hubbie doesn't give me any time to work on computer tomorrow. HOpe you have a nice Xmas planned.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/16/2019 8:44:00 PM

beautiful winter haiku... there's just something about icicles that make winter seem magical... hugs

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/15/2019 7:26:00 PM

Snow brings many amazing moments. Snow Angels, a Snowman. Those fun snow ball fights. Of course, sometimes icicles linger. Watch out for Squirrels!! :) Seems they like to ice skate on icicles. This is cute, clever and creative. :) Brandy

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/15/2019 5:45:00 PM

A delightful haiku, Joseph. It conjures pleasing images. Good luck in the contest.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/15/2019 4:05:00 PM

Brrr I can feel the image. Nicely done Joseph. Good luck. Tom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2019 4:02:00 PM

cute one, and squirrel breaks the ice can even have a double meaning if there is another squirrel on the scene!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/15/2019 3:23:00 PM

Hi Joseph, You created such a "winter" scene with a few words. It looks lovely. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/15/2019 3:15:00 PM

Superb winter haiku, Joseph--splendid imagery.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/15/2019 3:04:00 PM

Love the imagery .. good luck in the contest