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Snow White Feathers

My skin was cold, From freshly fallen snow. So pure, A sparkling white that made the scenery glow. Reminds me of a dove One I’ve dreamt to know. Snow danced, The wind whistled. As I stood there in thought. I stood until my skin turned blue, I stood until my teeth chattered. But whenever I thought of her, temperature ceased to matter. I let out a breath, One filled with forgotten words. Words I could never say to the snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/19/2016 2:13:00 PM
This was really nicely crafted and expressive. That last stanza was very cool.
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Abbey Mcdonnell
Date: 12/19/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much. :]

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